SGA Joint Writers Effort Alternative Ending Chapter 8

[joaniexjony]

Author joaniexjony

Words:- 2750

Warnings:- Mention of previous violence and some bad language.

Well Karel was killed at the end of the last chapter so what happens next?

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Comments

[shayasar]

*bounces* Oh, me likes a lot!!!

Great ending!! And very much in character! Loved it.

Still why did he have to kill the kid? John just didn’t get that.

That was for me, huh? *lol*

[sterenyk_strey]

Uh, still pissy here that you killed off a little kid, ShayaSar. By the by. :P

Thanks!

[joaniexjony]

So pleased you liked it!

I just wanted to tie everything up, and I'm glad I succeeded. As for John't line - not a dig...honest! Just an observation from a soldier as to why Karel would do something that wouldn't get him anything.

Thanks!

[sterenyk_strey]

Woot! A fitting end. I luffs it. Sigh... It's over! Unless...
dun dun dunnn... LOL!

Thanks!

[joaniexjony]

Yup, the stories over but its really been fun writing with you guys! Really pleased you liked the ending as I tried to tie everything up...but as for an alternative...well Hey, anything goes with this joint writing game!

[sherry57]

You finished this story off perfectly my dear. Just the right amount of care, love, friendship and attention from his team. I really, really enjoyed all of this story and congratulate a great team on putting together a great story and one that I will defintitely be saving to read again...and again...and again.

Thanks to you all!

Thanks!

[joaniexjony]

Thanks,

Glad you like it. It was a challenge to get the ending right as I wanted to tie up everyones imput. And of course thanks to shayasar for letting me do the wrap!
Have to say I really enjoyed working with the other writers and hope to continue this type of challenge in the future. Thanks again for your support!

Thanks!

[joaniexjony]

Glad you enjoyed it, as you're right. After everything we put him though John deserved some Carson care and team love!