Title: Promises Made, Promises Broken
Characters/Pairing : Jack/Ianto
Rating: R (This part contains smut & slash)
Spoilers: end of days.
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood... believe me... if i did Jack and Ianto would walk around in nothing but tight pants (and a tie for Ianto) The BBC own it. so as much as i love it i don't own it :(
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I laughed at the whole coat fetish thing!!!
Keep up the good work.
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I would suggest though that you take a little more time to re-read and rework your writing, before posting. There are a few places where I get the feeling you're thinking 'Ianto and Jack are really hot' while writing, rather than trying to get inside their heads, and think how Ianto and Jack would react to a situation. This sentence: Ianto came over from behind me in particular made me think that. (Should be "Jack", not "me"!).
I don't want you to think of this concrit as negative though - I am enjoying your writing, and such things come with practice. Looking forward to the next installment :)
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im not the best writer, or even a good writer, but i do try to not completely suck (which i realise is failing lol)
maybe after this fic ill get better, or maybe ill give up... i dunno... anyway. thanks for replying i take it all on board
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Guh. Who doesn't love Jack's coat? (Or Ianto's waistcoat. ^^ )
Please write more. :)
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