Fic: Consolidation in Seven Parts

Aug 30, 2012 12:45

Title: Consolidation in Seven Parts
Author: jncar
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~12,500
Summary: For the Behind Closed Doors Challenge at leslie_ben. Fills the prompt: “4.Consolidation: How do we get from the high drama of their reunion to them working together as a team again? What was that like in private? From the night after Smallest Park and The Trial of Leslie ( Read more... )

parks and rec, fic

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bowlsohard August 31 2012, 22:38:43 UTC
I will leave a comment at the finish line as well but let me just get some things off my chest:

"He'd never imagined she'd be more afraid of losing him than she was of losing her job, her reputation, her campaign . . . of losing Pawnee."
I can't make a decent comment about this other than to say that I love it.

"No. When he first kissed her, the risk had mostly been his. He never would have done it, otherwise."
I really struggled with Ben kissing Leslie in the first place because of this. I strongly believe that Ben was in love with her way before their first first kiss. And I thought it was somewhat selfish of him to act on it without having a frank discussion with her or just resigning from his job first so as to not get her in trouble. But you managed to explain that away in two sentences!

The Christmas lights were an amazing gift idea.

You did really great on the sexytimes writing! Especially the failed up against the door. Because honestly, how often does that work out? Especially for people like these two nerds :)

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shornt September 2 2012, 15:56:35 UTC
I still think this is amazing and it was so fun to watch you form it and I wish I had been able to collab more!

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