Flight 109 - Destination: First Love [Chapter 16]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Okay, so this time, this is an update :) So sorry for taking forever to do this. Writer's block and RL have been on the way. I hope you guys still remember this fic and am not losing readers along the way. Please accept this chapter as my offering :D

The extra pairing here is dedicated for kazukazu89 as she ships them :)

The story is inspired by

Comments

[janipanda]

Wow. You changed your name. *.*

Thank you for giving some happiness to Neen. He deserves it. -nod nod-

Girl, you made me cry again. Really. But that scene with Rei and Minako, them being friends even for a brief moment and the thing in between them (a certain Jun-person for example) is such a stark difference.

I love you for updating!

[jmonogatari]

I did about 2 months ago! XD
I love you for still reading this! I just realized i havent updated for the longest time! Eh? Which scene made you cry? I actually wrote this chap with the intention to have a lighter mood after the last chap XD I guess I failed then LOL

[janipanda]

And I love you for still updating this! I was always patiently waiting.

Which reminds me I still have to update 2 stories. Ack!

The tears started from here:And that's when Minako sees it. The girl may appear calm and collected, all business like. But her hands. Her hands that politely sits on top of her lap. They are shaking. They hold on to each other, wishing that Minako won't ever notice them.. The gap between her shaking hands and her straight face plus her calm voice is quite amazing. It is as if she has a supernatural power. A natural born actress.

And it didn't stop. Your way with words....I wanna be a writer like that that could touch people's emotions.

You certainly failed in the light heartedness chap! BUT, it is still an excellent chapter nonetheless!

[jmonogatari]

I was kinda wondering bout your updates XD but no pressure! write it whenever you feel like it and have the time :)

Ah, it is kinda amazing how you get touched by such a subtle hidden sadness :) Not everyone get touched by scenes like that, when it doesn't involve someone crying her heart out and verbally saying every heartbroken words out there.

[janipanda]

Un. For me, its the subtle nuances, the small gestures that touch me the most. I don't need the over the top scenes. Lol. I guess I'm already too influenced with how Japanese society is and how revealing of emotions is taboo.

I promise to write soon. -nod nod-