Flight 109 - Destination: First Love [Chapter 9]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The story is inspired by yeppie . As usual, comments, inputs and criticisms are highly appreciated. And if you haven't read the previous chapter you can always refer to the master post.
The airplane icon marks the present time. 30-31 August 2013.
The cloud icon marks the past. Around the year of 2006.

Comments

[janipanda]

Wow. Jun to leave arashi? And looks like Ohno has a deeper insight to this than we are being let on.

I can hear dun-dun-dun impending revelations soundtrack in the background!

Real interesting chapter!

[jmonogatari]

Hi! Hope you are getting better with the wisdom teeth extraction and all!

Dun-dun-dun, huh? So many infos in this chap! XD My head almost explodes writing this one.
Thanks for reading it and i am glad you find it interesting :)

[janipanda]

Its getting better and better each day. Pain less and less so its all good. Can't wait till I can eat my fave foods again!

What's your fave food?

It is definitely getting intriguing. Hopefully by the weekend, I can update mine. Were you disappointed Jun didn't stay with her?

[jmonogatari]

Fave food? I guess korean food.. but good korean food is so expensive here XD so I don't eat it as often as I would like :D Perhaps that's why it is my fave.

Disappointed? I guess yes and no. I mean yeah because we r hoping it right? No because then it would have been seemed to fast?

[janipanda]

Korean huh? Wow. I miss being in a diverse city. for now my main craving is Japanese because in my area, there's not much quality Japanese food. (you get tired of hamburger and fries, ya know?) I miss eating Kimchi too and my native foods.

Ahhh...I'm glad it got across. It would have been too fast. Hmm...maybe put a lil something to get ppl interested in the next chapter?

[jmonogatari]

Well IMO I've always remembered what my lecturer said about writing a scene (well she didn't teach writing fanfics, but I think it should work on fanfics as well XD), it is that in every scene there should be an emotional event within the characters.. If there's no emotional event, then the scene has no point being there. I always keep that in mind whenever i write for anything, including my fics :D

I have no idea how to get people interested tho XD There's no theory for it in any books, I guess every people sometimes are interested in different things. I kinda get that from reading the reader's comments, everyone reacted differently to different things. It is kinda interesting that way :)

[janipanda]

Well I am just happy that you are still reading. That meant it has touched you, resounded with you somewhere, somehow. -hug- And that is an interesting thought. Will keep that in mind then.

New Jun Icon!

[jmonogatari]

-hugs-
Sorry if I sound like lil miss know-it-all all of a sudden XD

I can't decide which icon to use, Jun from anan or jun from myojo :(
they are equally irresistible :D

[janipanda]

why chose when you can have it all, right? -wink- No, no. I like hearing other writer's opinions on writing and how they work. They improve my skills as well.

And the an-an one is sooo yummy.

Off topic again! XD did you see the concert goods yet? Can't resist! Junny is soooo yummy~~~~

[jmonogatari]

I don't want the concert goods. I don't want the photos. I WANT TO SEE THE CONCERT LIVE! (and a penlight + jun's jumbo uchiwa with that) :D

[janipanda]

You and me both! I WANNA SEE THEM LIVE AND THEN KIDNAP JUN!!!

YOu in?