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Bar Night: An Alternate Take

Nov 12, 2009 08:01

Title: Bar Night: An Alternate Take (or: The Dangers of Not Re-reading One’s Own Work)
Author: jlrpuck
Rating: K
Characters: Mickey, Jake, James, Penny, and Anna
Disclaimer: Characters from Doctor Who are the property of BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary ( Read more... )

oopsie, the way of things

Comments 28

tripocket November 12 2009, 15:55:52 UTC

Go Anna! Penny threw out a fairly awesome line himself. I'm sure the Torchwood team was a tad stunned by the boy tossing that out there.

I forget how much I like your Jake.

jlrpuck_fic November 22 2009, 22:59:03 UTC

I forgot how much I liked writing the various members of Rose's team. *sigh* I need to find a way to write another little TWoT interstice. Someday.

glorious_clio November 12 2009, 15:58:12 UTC

I liked this, even if it was an oops!! Anna pretty much rocks- I hope you flesh her out a bit more in the future.

Now I really want to reread the whole thing, but I have too much on my plate... :( Thank you for posting this!!

jlrpuck_fic November 22 2009, 22:59:40 UTC

Anna rather surprised me, being as saucy as she was. I think it's why she's so good for Penny, who tends to be a bit reserved!

meralee82 November 12 2009, 16:32:28 UTC

This was just fun. I love how Anna holds her own 'gainst all the guys.

I also adore how cute Jake and Mickey are together. :-)

jlrpuck_fic November 22 2009, 23:00:02 UTC

It was fun to go back and play with these characters at this point in time again.

liber_noctuae November 12 2009, 16:42:34 UTC

Anna ftw! kind of makes me want to see some Rose/Anna interactions, maybe even with Ruby.

I love the Jake/Mickey dynamic too, we haven't seen that in a while. It was a bit of a shocker to go back this far, I've gotten so used to seeing Peter and Rose as a solid couple, that one forgets how tenuous it was for a bit.

If this was an oops, I can't wait to see the real thing :) Good Luck moving! may it be as stress free as possible.

jlrpuck_fic November 22 2009, 23:00:55 UTC

I think Rose, Anna, and Ruby together would be ... unholy. In a very good, very fun way. >:)

I've gotten so used to seeing Peter and Rose as a solid couple, that one forgets how tenuous it was for a bit.

I always kind of forget about that, too!

silencing November 12 2009, 16:42:55 UTC

I love these guys. And go Anna!

jlrpuck_fic November 22 2009, 23:01:25 UTC

Anna's pretty frickin' fantastic. I suspect she's a schoolteacher, given her ability to hold her own!