A Quiet Thing (1/1)

Mar 05, 2009 05:22

Title: A Quiet Thing (1/1)
Rating: K
Characters: Rose Tyler, Peter Carlisle
Disclaimer: Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of BBC, are are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary: Rose finds Peter after a long night at work.
Notes: Inspired by swankkat.

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carlisle, year 7, rose

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silencing March 5 2009, 11:42:45 UTC
There's something to be said for insomnia on a Thursday morning, first crack at a new Peter/Rose drabble.

Wow. I can't even explain how much I liked this. Poor Peter, taking a beating like that. I love how Rose doesn't freak out though, just soothes him and gets him to bed. They are quite perfect together.

And you're writing just blows my mind sometimes. This was so incredibly well written, it paced so well with what was going on, you can feel the peace of their moment in the bathroom when he first wakes. Simply stunning.

I'd say more but I'm afraid I'm too incoherant due to lack of sleep.

(ETA: Holy crap. First? Really? Wow, two points to insomnia!)

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 15:51:02 UTC
There's something to be said for insomnia on a Thursday morning

Ugh, insomnia. I hope you've been able to get caught up on your sleep!

I love how Rose doesn't freak out though, just soothes him and gets him to bed.

At this point in their relationship, they've each seen the other beat up on more than one occasion. Poor kids. ;)

This was so incredibly well written, it paced so well with what was going on, you can feel the peace of their moment in the bathroom when he first wakes.

Thank you. It helps, of course, to have a gorgeous, clear picture which can be used as inspiration. And, well, I just love the *imagery* of sleepy!Peter.

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tripocket March 5 2009, 12:04:03 UTC
Oh that was lovely and um... well let's just say I'll have great pictures in my head all day.

I think maybe I need to read it again to be sure I didn't miss anythng-yeah that's it.

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 15:51:48 UTC
I'm very happy to have given you some nice fodder for the imagination :)

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earlgreytea68 March 5 2009, 12:40:43 UTC
Mmmm, so quiet and so relaxing. What a lovely way to start off a Thursday. I shall be calm today!

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 15:52:26 UTC
I hope your Thursday was as calm as you'd hoped.

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beatlejessie March 5 2009, 13:02:50 UTC
Just lovely! Poor Peter, and a glimpse of how wonderfully sweet Rose is, especially when she is worried about him. :)

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 15:53:24 UTC
Rose is very good about not coddling or pandering to Peter...except when he lapses into little-boy mode, as he sort of does here.

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justlook3 March 5 2009, 13:54:37 UTC
Awww, this was sweet and fluffy like a warm towel. Although the image of Peter in the bath did short circuit my brain for several moments! What a way to wake up!

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 15:54:10 UTC
Rose is very, very lucky in that she gets to wake up to Peter every morning. But finding him in the bath...well, I think that is just about the best way she's ever found him, of a morning. :)

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