An Alternate Thing - Story Five

Aug 22, 2008 09:49

Title: The Bait
Rating: M
Author: jlrpuck
Disclaimer: Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary: What if Peter Carlisle's mum hadn't died from an overdose?
Authors Notes: Sometimes, begging *does* ( Read more... )

heiress rose, what if, professor peter

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Re: AAT story 5 comments jlrpuck_fic August 22 2008, 17:04:34 UTC
I DO so love this alt!world Peter & Rose. Not more than the other, but certainly no less.

It depends on my mood as to which one I favor more--but I do love both worlds very much indeed.

ODG. I *know* this person.

:) so do I. WHY DO THEY NEVER SHUT UP?!

I adore the imagery of the turning ring as it helps him uncoil the past and move towards the future.

Thank you. I just liked the rhythm of it, honestly--and it provided a nice unifier as Peter collects his thoughts. Yet again, though, my subconscious was working merrily away...

why, FFS, was he *at* the meeting to begin with

He probably had to provide an update on his research, or something. Or maybe he was just being conscientious...

he has one for the cottage in the other, right ?

Ummm...I don't think I ever said he did...did I? The doors to the rooms in the cottage are skeleton keyed...I don't see why the front door couldn't have an ancient key, too.

I think perhaps Prof!Peter is over analyzing this just a little bit...

Just a bit, yes. But it's what he does ;)

I don't really think that it was just reacting.

In that moment, though, he was. Sure, he thought about it leading up to the point--but he finally just turned the thoughts off, and *did* instead of analysed.

I do love the imagery,

Thank you. The imagery was definitely a conscious decision--and I liked that the naked skin of his finger served as a real representation of how naked his soul is here.

I *love* this.

Thank you again. This is probably one of my favorite Prof!Peter/Heiress Rose exchanges, ever. Well, out of the six stories I've written. *g* (you won't find the sixth--it's not posted)

Happy Friday!

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Re: AAT story 5 comments xebgoc August 22 2008, 17:18:37 UTC
(you won't find the sixth--it's not posted)

TEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: AAT story 5 comments jlrpuck_fic August 22 2008, 17:59:35 UTC
TEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes. But you knew that already *g*

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