And So Things Go, Chapter 10

Jul 31, 2008 05:18

Title- And So Things Go (10/34)
Author- jlrpuck
Rating - T
Pairing - Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Disclaimer - Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary - The story of how Peter Carlisle moved to ( Read more... )

year 1, carlisle, glasgow, elias, and so things go

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liber_noctuae July 31 2008, 11:01:06 UTC
and had been watching the lately arrived explosive disposal unit do their work

ah, so not a body then.

Peter hadn’t been able to get out of the house fast enough

I know I should be concerned that our dear DI might have gotten himself exploded, but I can't help but giggle at the image of him and his gangly appendages wriggling to get back out the window really quickly. hee.

He was a bloody idiot.

well yeah you are, but at least give yourself a bit of cushioning before Rose and others come down on you for it.

Yes. Rose was going to kill him…assuming she found out.

she'd find out somehow, even if no one else told her, one day it would slip out.

“Who’s the idiot as decided it would be a good idea to go in?”

Peter shifted guiltily, avoiding the man’s gaze; Elias stayed silent.

“You’re bloody idiots, the both of you.”

sporfle. mischievious boys to the end, the pair of them *ruffles their hair*

The doors were wired to a series of small canister bombs, chock full of nails

ouch. Good thing Rose didn't find you in hospital full of holes then.

“Two bodies in the back-quadrant C.”

ah, bodies, but not where expected. well assuming they are Judy's friends, they must have known something she did not.

“Yeah, got ‘em over the summer after an adventure with someone’s pet iguana,”

hee. I imagine the dimples of grievance came out for that one, of course until Rose kissed him better ;)

“I’m not a Sassenach.”.....Peter released a put-upon sigh, sliding them across the metal to Elias

oooh. someone's grumpy. To almost angsty teen levels even. understandable, but still amusing.

“That’s the one! The streaky bloke!” ........“Do you promise not to hit the nice DI?”

heheh, I can only imagine she must be enjoying herself....just a little bit ;)

“I reckon Rose likes it well enough.”

now I really can't wait for the day those two meet.

Cheerful? When had he ever been cheerful on the job?

*rolls eyes* yes Peter, it's called job satisfaction, you may have heard of it ;)

it was a shiny new machine, capable of running exact colour copies

bet they don't have one of those in Kendal

Things were still a bit odd in this case-and until he knew things were not odd, he wasn’t sure he trusted the original copies of the report with anyone.

spidey sense still on alert I see....curious.

He’d thought, when they first met, that he’d never have got on with Elias outside of the case. Now? Now, he wasn’t nearly so sure that was true.

awww. I love seeing him work his way in hesitant steps through the formation of this friendship.

he lay back onto the bed, wondering if he’d ever get past that point, ever be able to be separated from her, unable to speak with her whenever he wanted, and not be a bit upset about it.

When had he become so dependent upon her for his personal happiness?

That's really the crux of this story isn't it? It's frightening yet comforting to be that attached to someone, especially for Peter with his history.

Oh I did love this chapter, there was the bombs, the Peter/Elias banter, the Ruby banter, and intriguing case developments. I do hope we get a glimpse of Rose soon, poor Peter could use a cuddle. Now, if only it were Monday :)

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jlrpuck_fic July 31 2008, 15:10:48 UTC
ah, so not a body then.

Well, not at the front door at least.

but I can't help but giggle at the image of him and his gangly appendages wriggling to get back out the window really quickly. hee.

I daresay his exit was more PiC-y, than his entrance. Poor Peter! ;)

mischievious boys to the end, the pair of them *ruffles their hair*

I always seem to picture them as little spaniel puppies, rolling around, playing, tails wagging...

Good thing Rose didn't find you in hospital

...or the morgue.

I imagine the dimples of grievance came out for that one,

Mmmm. Dimples. *mind drifts*

I can only imagine she must be enjoying herself....just a little bit ;)

Out of the three of them, I think Ruby is the one having the most fun.

bet they don't have one of those in Kendal

That they don't.

I love seeing him work his way in hesitant steps through the formation of this friendship.

It's relatively new territory for him, I think. At least since Blackpool...

That's really the crux of this story isn't it? It's frightening yet comforting to be that attached to someone, especially for Peter with his history.

Yes--and yes.

I do hope we get a glimpse of Rose soon, poor Peter could use a cuddle.

Rose will re-appear soon enough ;)

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liber_noctuae July 31 2008, 16:58:10 UTC
I always seem to picture them as little spaniel puppies, rolling around, playing, tails wagging...

Sporfle!

Out of the three of them, I think Ruby is the one having the most fun.

Seeing as how she's on the Met already, do the three of them regularly make a team once Peter's on board?

Rose will re-appear soon enough ;)

ooOOooh.

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jlrpuck_fic July 31 2008, 22:33:15 UTC
Seeing as how she's on the Met already, do the three of them regularly make a team once Peter's on board?

Erm....sometimes?

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principia July 31 2008, 19:15:40 UTC
...or the morgue.

...being identified by his dental x-rays.

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jlrpuck_fic July 31 2008, 22:34:59 UTC
...being identified by his dental x-rays.

Exactly.

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liber_noctuae July 31 2008, 22:39:44 UTC
eep! I don't even want to imagine how much more broken she would be than grounded! Rose.

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principia July 31 2008, 22:43:13 UTC
eep! I don't even want to imagine how much more broken she would be than grounded! Rose.

Probably about as broken as Peter would have been in the future (wioll haven be?) had Rose and Lucy not survived Lucy's birth.

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jlrpuck_fic July 31 2008, 22:44:46 UTC
Rose would be crushed. Utterly. I think Elias and Ruby would befriend her, but...yeah. It would be bad. Think how bad it could possibly be, then add another suitcase of bad.

And I am *not* exploring that possibliity any further, because the thought of killing Peter off makes me want to vomit.

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liber_noctuae July 31 2008, 22:50:32 UTC
And I am *not* exploring that possibliity any further, because the thought of killing Peter off makes me want to vomit.

agreed.

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principia July 31 2008, 23:56:09 UTC
And I am *not* exploring that possibliity any further, because the thought of killing Peter off makes me want to vomit.

Amen to that.

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xebgoc August 1 2008, 01:59:20 UTC
glory halleluja !

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