An Outdoor Thing

Apr 07, 2008 07:54



An Outdoor Thing

Peter sighed happily, contentment radiating through his body. He and Rose were once more at the cottage, had taken advantage of an unusually warm weekend to drive up from Kendal and simply hide. The zanzare had finally sussed out that Rose was, in fact, dating him; wasn’t simply using him to meet some physical needs, or to amuse ( Read more... )

croy, snogging, romance, rose, carlisle, year 1, happy, smut

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jlrpuck_fic April 8 2008, 22:45:04 UTC
I've been waiting for something like this since Chapter 16.

And this is an idea I've been noodling with since before then. Waaaay back, the original idea *was* to have Chapter 16 be an outdoor shag. But it just didn't work...and so here it is, as a ficlet.

Did she meet him in A Surprise Thing/A Contemplative Thing or is this more of a any-friend-of-Peter's thing?

She met him after A Contemplative Thing--she and Peter would have gone up to Graeme and Eirlys's for supper the night of their morning make-up sex.

I love that Peter gets overwhelmed by the physical/emotional double whammy that is Rose in this place.

I just couldn't see him staying level-headed, not with the combination of place and sensation.

Right now, he's got everything he could possibly want, and I'm not sure he quite believes that it's happening.

Poor Peter. There are more than a few times that this happens for him, too--where things are exactly as he'd always dreamed, but he still can't quite believe he's so darned lucky.

Glad someone still has half a brain, because I don't.

There really are very *few* times in their pre-marital relationship that they have unprotected sex.

Seriously, you need to patent this warm/hot combo thing.

*blushes* Thank you.

They are both so scared that they're going to hurt each other...it just makes my heart squeeze.

They're still so early in their relationship, all things considered. And they've both had bad, bad experiences in the past. Poor Rose. Poor Peter.

Loreen is a stupid, stupid woman.

Yes, she is. A thousand times over.

She's seeing the world the way he does, and really rooting herself to a *place*

That she is. It's part of Rose allowing herself to believe that this relationship is real, and long-term, and that they won't be ripped apart.

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