The Way of Things, Chapter 43

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In the end, finding Swinson was the easiest part of the entire endeavour-if driving in circles, playing hot and cold, for several hours as the evening turned into night could be called ‘easy.’

They had spent fruitless hours driving in and around Kendal, chasing down red herrings and old traces, dutifully calling to check in every hour. The time

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[starxd_sparrow]

Incredible - not only have you skillfully brought a resolution to the mystery, you've introduced a new one! I would follow this story anywhere, honestly - especially if it ended up at Torchwood. This little bit gave me a glimmer of hope - It seemed people didn’t come to Torchwood looking for work, Torchwood came looking for them. Of course, it also has me wondering if Peter would accept a position with Torchwood... *ponders*

funny that it was her romantic betrayal that had pushed him over the edge
Just goes to show that love is one man's downfall and another man's saving grace - brilliant parallel (or, perhaps, perpendicular?).

He couldn’t remember the last time he’d thought of that; during her time in Kendal, during their time together, he’d come to think of her as simply Rose.
That bit got my heart pounding a bit quicker - what a dear, dear sentiment.

And you should have seen her blush! Like a right virgin, that one.”
Peter choked on his coffee.
Oh, I love it! Not only is it just too adorable - doesn't it show how far our dear Peter has come? In the past, he'd have probably thrown some subtle (or not-so-subtle) quip back - but now, he holds his tongue. The Rose effect is profound and far-reaching to be certain!

As ever, I love this. I can't wait for the thrilling conclusion. but as I keep saying, I'll be sad to see it come to an end.

[jlrpuck_fic]

Of course, it also has me wondering if Peter would accept a position with Torchwood... *ponders*

One of the ficlets will address this...well, hopefully. I still have to write it ;)

Just goes to show that love is one man's downfall and another man's saving grace

Indeed--love is either a salvation or a damnation, depending on how much you let it control you. Good thing Peter's on the winning side of that parallel.

The Rose effect is profound and far-reaching to be certain!

Oh, definitely. :)

I can't wait for the thrilling conclusion. but as I keep saying, I'll be sad to see it come to an end.

*sigh* You and me both.

Have a good week!