FIC; Obsidian - Chapter 11

[jjigae]

Title: Obsidian [Chapter 11]
Authors: roselit & mcgrjc6
Genre: DBSK/SuJu crossover, action/violence, [sexual] romance, drama
Pairing(s): JaeMin (mainly)
Rating: PG-15 to NC-17 (violence, smut, profanity, etc.)
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the people in my writing (with the exception of minor OCs); I only own the plot & words.
Summary: He’s leading a double

Comments

[bunni102]

LOL! SPOT!

[jjigae]

Hahaha, wow, you're fast! XD;

[bunni102]

OMO! Heechul why are so evil in here! He did that to poor jae!
ALl well still an awesoem chapter!

[jjigae]

*nodnod* I know~ ;___; He's.. really.. yeah. a;lsjf;sdf
It's so complicated between these two. ;;
Thank you for reading & commenting~ ♥

[yuxo]

OMFG PANDIANE OMFG BRB ADSLFKJDSF ILUSFM YOU KNOW THAT

[jjigae]

HAHA~ XD see, I didn't lie to you on msn last night! ;x
ilusm yuxisushi~~ ♥

[jjigae]

p.s. Jenni said she's glad you're here to read the chapter, too, LOL. XD;

[yuxo]

WHAT

[kurogoma]

unexpected smut, but this chapter totally explains the heechul/jaejoong relationship.

jaejoong should heed siwon's words. changmin is already in danger, and i am surprised jae hasn't got that in his head yet.

[jjigae]

Hee. :x *nodnod* It's a complicated sort of relationship, especially since Jae doesn't know how he really feels about it anymore... ^^

Ahh, Jae's the hotheaded one who doesn't like being told.. anything. XDDD;;

Thank you, as always, for reading & commenting! :D

[kurogoma]

It's a complicated sort of relationship, especially since Jae doesn't know how he really feels about it anymore...

i am worried how min will feel if he ever knows the true nature of the heechul/jaejoong relationship. i don't think it ever crossed his mind it could be physical or sexual. wouldn't he feel so betrayed? ;___;

i hope their enemies will not use this to hurt either of them.

and heechul kept saying jaejoong belongs to him and jaejoong not refuting him at all. his need for revenge still renders him powerless against heechul's grip on him.

yeah... tis a truely complicated web of relationships.

[jjigae]

Min would feel betrayed if he knew, wouldn't he~ ;___;
It's so.. frustrating!~ haha. We'll have to see how everything works out. ^^

Yeah.. Heechul's REALLY possessive of Jae. :|
& that's true, that his want for revenge still makes him like that.. that, along with his confused mix of emotions over the relationship. ;___;

*nodnod* Quite~ ^^ Thank you for the in-depth speculatory comments! I love hearing readers analyze and think and just.. yeah. XD; ♥

[theresa_lynne]

Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. ;________;

Hate Heechul. D:

[jjigae]

;________; ~~~ I knowwww~ it hurts me too. ;;;

D: !! He's pretty.. out there. x___X;

Thank you for reading & commenting~ X3; ♥

[amouralamer]

Oh man! My poor Jaejoong! And I hate my Chullie in this! I HATE to hate my Chullie!

I hate to say it, but your Chullie must die!!!

[jjigae]

I know~ ;___; It hurts me too~~ oh Jae.. ;;
Hahaha, that's fine~ Heechul's pretty hate-able in this.. XD!! especially after this chapter. :x

Thank you, as always, for reading & commenting! :D