Dead Bodies, Death and Killing (chap 4)

[jishu]

Title:  Dead Bodies, Death and Killing
Pairing:  Onew/Taemin, slight Onew/Jonghyun in this chap.

Chapter I:  Fascination of Dead Bodies

Chapter II:  Killing a Mermaid

Chapter III:  Killing An Ex-Boyfriend

CHAPTER IV:  Killing A Possibly New Friend

It's been all over the news about the missing dead bodies.  Apparently, somebody had been digging graves,

Comments

[ontaejongminkey]

Gruesome Jinki at his best! OMG! My face looks like this rn -- O_________________O negl.

Poor Jonghyun. tsk tsk tsk. His new friend sliced his head off. Great start for a friendship, if I do say so myself.

Great job as always!^^
PS. I love the small sex scene with Jinki bottoming! It's my otp! Taemin/Onew. lol XD Thank you for updating so fast bb!<3

[jishu]

You really are truly the fastest commenter ever~! XD I'm afraid the next chapter won't be updated as fast since I haven't started writing yet *pouts* And because of the small sex scene here, I feel oblige to write another sex scene but I fail at smut *hides under a rock*

[ontaejongminkey]

Yes! I am a ninja. So yeah. :P
Besides, i'm too inlove with this story that when you update I grin from ear to ear! No pressure on updating though! Take your time and i'll always be here to comment!^^

Naah! You can do it! Hwaiting! :)

[sooeunhae_15]

~~~~one word that describes my feelings now . . . . . . EXCITED!!! hahaha, i really really like the flow of the story,

~~~ i think the next victim is MINHO, hehe, i wish i was with them, but jinki will probably kill me, haha,

[jishu]

Minho? Hmm... we'll see~ ^^

[sooeunhae_15]

hahaha, ^_^

[starbursts132]

o___0 <~~my face right now/while reading

*sigh* where do i start?! i loved it all!!! the sex scene, taemin running around with a sword (lol), jonghyun being killed. oh yea!! and one of my favorite parts was when taemin kicked kibum's body!

well, i'll just be waiting here untill you get back!! i'm sure whatever you write will be amazing!!

*hugs because i feel like it*

[jishu]

*hugs back* Kibum still has a role even though he's dead~ Lolz XD and I'm glad you loved this. The sex scene was awkward for me to write. I don't think I did justice to my imagination~ tsk tsk...Thanks for reading ^^

[eliluvzeu]

/goosebumps ok I'm here as promised^^

Like I said sex in a coffin is just too wild! poor onew being raped by his dad when he was asleep poor thing D: If I had been onew I would have fainted in the coffin >< oh gosh you could have told me the title before asking me to read it /sobs I had a shock of my life when I read the title>< but oh well it's not as scary as I thought it was but STILL!!!! D: lol wondrful as ever I love your fics honestly!!! /glomps love you ^^ update soon I will read it haha ^^ ontae is not that bad a pairing after all^^

[jishu]

I never thought that there is a bad pairing in this world~ It's just a matter of how someone writes a fic about them ^^ <-- The reason why she writes rare pairings~ Lolz~ I'm glad you liked this and read it because you LOVE me and not because of the BRIBE XD and I'm really thankful <3 I will tell you when I update~ and I'm sorry for not warning you ahead~ XD;;

[elfrulezforever]

OOooOOOOOooo I LOVE TOP!TAE!!!ESPECIALLY WHEN IT COMES TO ONTAE RELATIONSHIP~~~~~
WOW JONG GETTING CHOPPED...WELL JONGHYUN REMEMBER DON'T TRY TO SEDUCE ONEW...HAHAHA

[jishu]

Jonghyun doesn't have to remember that. He's dead already~ Hahahaha!!! Thanks for reading <3