I didn't realise Sky took the hair tie =P must've been too engrossed in imagining the kissing~ wow, so it really was a premonition! It's a good thing he remembered just in time; i was like, 'whew' =3= the hug; beautiful scene indeed~ What's going on in Darwin's head? o_o
“Sky, listen to me…” Kyle kept on following Sky. “There’s nothing to explain!!!” they sound like a quarrelling couple :D
His heart was beating fast i can imagine how Sky must be feeling at this moment..
“You look cuter with your hair down.” he's gonna look cute no matter how he wears his hair @_@
That when he realize that all of this was too familiar thank goodness he realized just in time ^_^
a fast-paced truck passed by stupid truck. arent trucks supposed to be slow???? ><
He ran and hugged Kyle. He was so relief to see Kyle safe and alive unlike his dream. With so much relief, he started to cry. His tears mixed with the rain.
Kyle was confuse as to why Sky was acting this way. But he didn’t bother to ask. He hugged Sky back and tried to comfort him as he knows that Sky was crying. A couple hugging under the rain. It was a beautiful scene. the most beautiful ending to the most beautiful chappie T^T
AH!! i love this so much!! im glad i decided to read!!
stupid truck. arent trucks supposed to be slow???? >< It is? Well, I see a lot of fast trucks here ^_^ Especially on my way to school which is...in the middle of nowhere XD
well i dont actually know lol maybe just in Brunei... :P
your school is in the middle of nowhere? the middle of nowhere is usually an awesome setting for a scary story :D although any school could be a spooky setting, especially if its at night ^_^
i wish my school was in the middle of nowhere. that way i dont have to deal with so much traffic with people going to work n people going to the nearby schools @_@ we have to have traffic officers around to make sure there aren't too much traffic
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A beautiful scene indeed!
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That was soooo good! The whole premonition/deja vu thing was wicked!
And, yeah, I agree with sallysync, I'm really starting to hate Darwin. At first, I just disliked him, but now~
He almost killed Kyle!
hehe I'm getting so emotionally involved in a fictional story..
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it sort of says that my writing is good. lolz
Thanks for reading ^_^
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I can't wait for the next chapter~
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I'll try to put it up tomorrow...hehehe
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wow, so it really was a premonition! It's a good thing he remembered just in time; i was like, 'whew' =3= the hug; beautiful scene indeed~
What's going on in Darwin's head? o_o
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which I'm sure you probably know by now that you've read everything. lolz
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“There’s nothing to explain!!!”
they sound like a quarrelling couple :D
His heart was beating fast
i can imagine how Sky must be feeling at this moment..
“You look cuter with your hair down.”
he's gonna look cute no matter how he wears his hair @_@
That when he realize that all of this was too familiar
thank goodness he realized just in time ^_^
a fast-paced truck passed by
stupid truck. arent trucks supposed to be slow???? ><
He ran and hugged Kyle. He was so relief to see Kyle safe and alive unlike his dream. With so much relief, he started to cry. His tears mixed with the rain.
Kyle was confuse as to why Sky was acting this way. But he didn’t bother to ask. He hugged Sky back and tried to comfort him as he knows that Sky was crying. A couple hugging under the rain. It was a beautiful scene.
the most beautiful ending to the most beautiful chappie T^T
AH!! i love this so much!! im glad i decided to read!!
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im glad i decided to read this fic xD
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It is? Well, I see a lot of fast trucks here ^_^
Especially on my way to school which is...in the middle of nowhere XD
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your school is in the middle of nowhere? the middle of nowhere is usually an awesome setting for a scary story :D although any school could be a spooky setting, especially if its at night ^_^
i wish my school was in the middle of nowhere. that way i dont have to deal with so much traffic with people going to work n people going to the nearby schools @_@ we have to have traffic officers around to make sure there aren't too much traffic
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