LR Revision
It has been a while but I started tackling LR again.
It wasn't as bad as I thought. One beta thought the story was 'meh' but so far, I think there is a potential.
I've also divided the 20k MS into 9 chapters; allowing readers to take a break and let them know there is an immediate end is a good thing, I think.
It's still an awkward length though...but first, I'll finish this revision, send it out to critters--I do need to catch up on that one--and see if I need to write Part 2 in second protagonist's POV.
It wasn't as bad as I thought. One beta thought the story was 'meh' but so far, I think there is a potential.
I've also divided the 20k MS into 9 chapters; allowing readers to take a break and let them know there is an immediate end is a good thing, I think.
It's still an awkward length though...but first, I'll finish this revision, send it out to critters--I do need to catch up on that one--and see if I need to write Part 2 in second protagonist's POV.