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LR Progress: Revision 1.0 - Flow
(title: Spirit Dancer)
18,049 / 20,998(85.96%)
Too much walking around for the main villain. Would a crazed guy move about? Perhaps.
Hopefully I can wrap up this round of revision and start the next round soon. I think my reader waited 3 months to see it; not that I can see any particular eagerness... haha.
Todo:
Revision 1. Flow & M-R
Revision 2. Flow & rid of confusion
Revision 3. Sentence level (read backwards? still haven't tried this)
Revision 4. Fix critiqued sections
(title: Spirit Dancer)
18,049 / 20,998(85.96%)
Too much walking around for the main villain. Would a crazed guy move about? Perhaps.
Hopefully I can wrap up this round of revision and start the next round soon. I think my reader waited 3 months to see it; not that I can see any particular eagerness... haha.
Todo:
Revision 1. Flow & M-R
Revision 2. Flow & rid of confusion
Revision 3. Sentence level (read backwards? still haven't tried this)
Revision 4. Fix critiqued sections