"Sins" and "Traps"
Yesterday brought considerable progress to the current rewrite of my Sins of the Heart screenplay.
I deleted some scenes, combined some scenes, restored some scenes from an earlier version, re-ordered some scenes to make the 3-act structure more effective, made some scenes more visual, and wound up with what feels like a more powerful, truer piece.
I now plan to set Sins aside for a few days while I work on the third draft rewrite of Traps, then come back to Sins with refreshed eyes.
I deleted some scenes, combined some scenes, restored some scenes from an earlier version, re-ordered some scenes to make the 3-act structure more effective, made some scenes more visual, and wound up with what feels like a more powerful, truer piece.
I now plan to set Sins aside for a few days while I work on the third draft rewrite of Traps, then come back to Sins with refreshed eyes.