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joandsarah April 6 2010, 22:10:07 UTC
Interesting Jilly. I'm not a hundred percent certain I am getting the end correctly...are those people he murdered then immortalised in stone or are the actual people in his garden turned to stone? Creepy whichever way it is!

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holleyb76 April 6 2010, 23:03:19 UTC
It's the first one Jo.
I'll say it again Jill, WOW What a shocker at the end. Totally didn't see that coming the first time I read it.
I love how you made us like him and then it's thrown back in our face.

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jillyson April 7 2010, 16:35:58 UTC
Thanks, Guys. I just love this one, but it would've never come together without all my helpful editors!
*Cough Holley, Tina, and Marsha Cappy!

Yes, Jo, Holley's right. He offs them, then makes a statue of them for his garden. His own monument to all his acheivments, just like he was mocking her for wanting.

Gillian! How cool - I haven't heard from you in ages!!!
No pics, this was something I did for a writer's group that I belong to. We meet once a month, and sometimes they give us a theme to write about. This one and my Valentine's story are from that.

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amylu1988 April 8 2010, 13:24:55 UTC
:D Loved this Jilly, the ending was brilliant and unexpected and the main character Tony was really interesting and different.

You do write such good stories, and I really enjoyed this one too. Yay! x

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aussie_karima April 16 2010, 12:51:22 UTC
~ Wow!>"<

~ I am so glad you did get to post this on LJ, so we could all read your amazing work,I loved this,....the way you make us all feel sorry for him, & then find out that he truly is a dark & mysterious artist, using his sorrow, & the cause of that sorrow as his muse! & his creative outlet!BRAVO!;D

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