Brandywine's 15 minute challenge

Sep 01, 2007 01:17


This was written for Brandywine421's 15 minute challenge. (I'm sorry, but it took me an hour. I've only reread it a couple of times and it's late, so bear with me.)

Title: Finality
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to The O.C. 
Word count: 1556

Finality )

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brandywine421 September 1 2007, 12:32:27 UTC
I really liked this, and your choice of 2nd person POV works really well here. So sad - and such a plausible scenario with Seth wanting Ryan to come along and the cops making him have to make a quick exit as well as Ryan undoing his seat belt to find a bag.

So sad.

I'm so glad you decided to play!

















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jillbee7 September 1 2007, 21:13:30 UTC
Ahh, you read my fic! This is amazing; I love yours so I feel sort of honoured. Haha. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm not used to writing in second person, but it just felt right so I thought I'd try it. And thank you for the cake! (I'm starving, now. Mmmmm. They look so good.)

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