Fic: Syncopation Chapter 5/6

[jij]

Title:  Syncopation:  Chapter Five (of Six)
Pairing:  Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Series Notes:  Syncopation is part of The Music of the Spheres, a combined Superman Returns/Batman Begins series. The whole series can be found here. 
Rating: PG
Summary:  Batman searches for the missing Harvey Dent

Comments

[batfan_sarah]

"Bruce Wayne watched as they tore down the last safe place in the world."

oh my god.

this chapter was just so touching and tragic, but of course beutifully written.

as usual, great characterization and plot development, and i can't stand how great your harvey and bruce voices are here. oh, and jim! can't forget jim!

bottom line: love it. So very very much.

[jij]

Thank you! Angstier than my usual style so I'm gratified it works for you. :)

I love jim. I could probably write a whole fic of Jim Gordon sitting in a chair and brooding. He'd do it so poetically. :)

[batfan_sarah]

"I could probably write a whole fic of Jim Gordon sitting in a chair and brooding. He'd do it so poetically."

haha, you probably could. i'd certainly enjoy it.

on that note...is it really wrong to like bruce/jim...? i think on some level it is, but there's just something so sweet and sad about it...i dunno.

anyway, er, yeah. i'm gonna go now. good job.

[jij]

on that note...is it really wrong to like bruce/jim...? i think on some level it is, but there's just something so sweet and sad about it...i dunno.

God, think of the identity porn though! Jim and Bruce can finish having hot sex in which Bruce delicately shifts between the playboy and his realler self, and then Jim goes off to work and meets Batman on the rooftop...and they both know he probably knows it's his lover but he isn't sure and doesn't really want to know...

I don't know why more people don't write Bruce/Jim. I find it quite tempting.

[batfan_sarah]

well, my birthday is tomorrow...

*cough*

free presents are good to give...

*cough choke nudge nudge*

...yes.

[jij]

What??! I wasn't warned! LJ didn't tell me! No fair! *stares around wildly*

Ummmm...it'll be belated and short, but I bet I can do something...

[batfan_sarah]

*jumps about*

i appreciate it!

you don't have to do it right away...belated presents are usually better-thought-out anyway ^^

[jij]

LOL, this one isn't thought out at all, it jumped me in class and demanded I write it, so...there it is. :)

[batfan_sarah]

i just read and commented on it and i want to tell you again how wonderful it was, and how thoughtful it was of you to write it for me on such short notice!

thank you again!! XD