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jij

Fic: Delectus Meus Mihi...

Jan 01, 2007 21:35

Title: Delectus Meus Mihi...
Characters: Bruce/Clark
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Notes: Written for the 2006 Secret Santa for
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jij January 2 2007, 05:13:18 UTC

You did, and thank you! Such lovely feedback always makes my day. I'm glad you liked it!

zvi_likes_tv January 1 2007, 14:17:21 UTC

That was really lovely. That bit, where Bruce says, "He said he wished he hadn't fallen in love with me, that he would never do it again if he had the choice. And then he left. And then he was gone," was like a punch in the gut.

But you left them with a little bit of hope. And cookies! Smallville has left me with a yen for Clark and food, so I really enjoyed that, too.

jij January 2 2007, 05:15:09 UTC

Hope and cookies! :) Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed this one...it was a lot of fun to write.

beyond_destiny January 1 2007, 14:25:38 UTC

You know that I loved it. I discover new things for every time I read it.

jij January 2 2007, 05:17:47 UTC

Thank you for your feedback there and here as well! I'm so glad you liked it and I did try to get lots of little details in there to catch on second reading with any luck... :)

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jij January 2 2007, 05:23:52 UTC

Hee, thank you! Poor Bruce! He's right there...*sniffle*

swingandswirl January 1 2007, 15:42:14 UTC

Okay, you are forgiven for ripping my heart out with your Bruce/Diana fic, because this... is beautiful. *tears up*

Wonderful chracterisation, as usual- the powerpoint thing is so *Bruce*, and Clark complaining about looking ridiculous... *falls over laughing* Wonderful nod to Birthright there.

He reached up absent-mindedly and touched the place on his chest where the ring lay underneath, continuing his lecture. Clark suddenly realized he had seen Bruce make that unconscious gesture many times now, but he had never realized what he was touching, like a talisman.
Way to break my heart, Jen! I love this, it shows how much Bruce loves Kal, and how painful this must be for him. *hugs her poor hurting Bat* Although... is the ring Bruce or Kal's? And if it's Bruce's, where is Kal's? *is curious* Oooh, now I'm imagining a scene where Kal finds his ring... *demands begs and pleads politely requests a sequel ( ... )

jij January 2 2007, 05:33:57 UTC

Okay, you are forgiven for ripping my heart out with your Bruce/Diana fic

Oh, thank goodness. :)

Although... is the ring Bruce or Kal's? And if it's Bruce's, where is Kal's? *is curious* Oooh, now I'm imagining a scene where Kal finds his ring...

*blinks* That could be a really great scene! Where would the ring have gotten to...hmmmm. Oooohhhh...

Okay, you've given me the hook. I need to finish a story for Rai's birthday and then I'm on it! :)

Glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing it. And any time I get to continue a sequence with an amnesiac Clark is much joy for me...

swingandswirl January 3 2007, 16:45:34 UTC

*bounces* More in this 'verse! Teh yays!

Oh, and because I forgot to mention it last time- lovely choice of words for the ring inscription- it's just so *them* it made my heart hurt.

jij January 4 2007, 01:27:15 UTC

LOL, I should have known that if I didn't end it completely happy my muses would require more! *bonks romantic muses*

For some reason I got it in my head the inscription had to be in Latin--I don't know why! And I've always loved the Song of Solomon...and that line is so simple and passionate at the same time.

*gins and thanks you again for hook*