Comments | jij: Music of the Spheres 5: Disorientations

jij

Music of the Spheres 5: Disorientations

Sep 21, 2006 08:46

Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Notes: "Music of the Spheres" is a series set in the combined universes of "Batman Begins" and "Superman Returns." Other stories and notes on the series here.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce decides to take Clark by surprise by arranging for them to meet a ( Read more... )

fic, spheres

Comments 74

wachey September 21 2006, 00:38:17 UTC

Omg!! That was great!! I thought Bruce had figured something out in that one part though, but no, he's still so clueless.

And the bathroom! Ha! I liked how Bruce said, 'So this is the mysterious bathroom.'

jij September 21 2006, 02:36:46 UTC

I thought Bruce had figured something out in that one part though, but no, he's still so clueless.

I'm being so mean to Bruce...he keeps having chances to get a clue but I don't let him do it. :)

Clark probably would have been worried about Bruce being pleased at seeing his bathroom if he hadn't been so distracted, too. *grin*

Glad you liked it!

ext_3384504 November 15 2015, 13:13:05 UTC

I love that you keep giving hints and clues, only to have Bruce remain clueless. Reading fan fics about Bruce and Clark are actually fairly hot and with the way they go at each other in comics and movies, it's funny that everyone keeps thinking sex :)
And yeah, if Clark hadn't been so out of it, he would have been suspicious about the "mysterious" bathroom comment of Bruce's.

mithen November 19 2015, 18:18:29 UTC

Poor Bruce, he...probably should have picked up what was going on, but Clark! Clark is so innocuous! :D

I'm so glad you've been enjoying this!

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jij September 21 2006, 02:40:10 UTC

Consider the entire fic, especially at teh club and hotel, quoted

LOL, that's a long quote! :)

This series though, makes me see an complex 'ship evolving in ways that pulls me into it.

Because there are so many "versions" of the characters (comics, toon, movies) a writer really has a lot to play around with. And the movies make it possible to show the relationship as short or longer (like in arch_schatten's version) so there's so much wonderful flexibility there.

It's a casual pairing I can play with.

But your playing is so much fun. :) I always look forward to when you dabble in S/B, although you write so many pairings so well (I'm so envious!)

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jij September 21 2006, 02:42:52 UTC

Your description of Clark's dancing rocks my world and makes me whimper

Having him so much more in touch with the alien side of himself is really challenging and fun here. I get to play around with how much "alien" I want to work in, which gives me a lot of room for fun. :)

Bruce's continuing cluelessness amuses me far, far too much.

Oh, me too. I'll pay some day for teasing Bruce and keeping him from figuring things out, I know it. My Bruce!muse will just clam up and refuse to talk someday.

I'm so glad you liked it...this was one of the story ideas that prompted me to get into the series, actually.

anonymous September 21 2006, 02:54:27 UTC

Yeah Brucie, he´s just gay...that made giggle^^
I´m think if I could fly I will fly always, me and the sky only^^what a dream!!
Love,
Spix
Ps:The net gave me "The entropy effect", "The Prometheus Desing", "Triangle" and "Dreadnought". I´m reading the first and you know what, is like reading fanfiction where the author is making money and we all know it and don´t care a damn thing about it. If I can love my Star wars books I can love my ST books!!
I wrote to you a while ago that your work must be published for real, right? Well, now I believe in that more!!

jij September 21 2006, 04:59:15 UTC

Yeah Brucie, he´s just gay...that made giggle^^

Poor Bruce. And yet it seems rather reasonable when you think about it... *grin*

I´m reading the first and you know what, is like reading fanfiction where the author is making money and we all know it and don´t care a damn thing about it.

Aren't those old stories great? Before the publishing companies figured out what was going on between the lines. *sigh*

vespa331 September 21 2006, 02:55:08 UTC

Now I'm picturing Bruce and Clark at my goth club.

Yum.
Thanks for the mental image ;)

I also really loved how Kal was the one who danced, not Clark.

jij September 21 2006, 05:01:05 UTC

Yeah...that's not a bad mental image at all, is it? :)

I also really loved how Kal was the one who danced, not Clark.

Clark doesn't know how to dance. :) He surprised me very much with that announcement, I have to say. But he was a total geek in school and never dared to try for fear of breaking someone's feet...poor kid.

Glad you liked it!