FIC: Not Another Moment (With Rai_Daydreamer)

[jij]

Title: Not Another Moment
Challenge prompt: 10. "Love is for the fools who fall behind" --

Comments

[seiberwing]

I have to say, I love the idea of J'onn assigning Batman the task of 'Superman' relaxer. He'd probably be utterly serious about it, too.

[jij]

LOL, J'onn would be extremely solemn about the importance of Superman unwinding a bit! I can just see him lecturing Batman and Bruce being all, "Okay, relax Superman, I have some theories on how to do that, bye!" :)

[icarus_chained]

And back on Watchtower, J'onn would be explaining to Flash that no, he wasn't smirking. Not in the slightest. *grin*

[jij]

J'onn had no idea they were dating! None at all! *whistles innocently*

[genclay]

I think my brain just dribbled out my ear :P

Gorgeous story.

I have to say i have a bit of thing for floating in the sex/snuggles, so this was bound to appeal to me. I have a few theories about kryptonian sex and floating but this probably is the time or place to get into it :P

[jij]

I have to say i have a bit of thing for floating in the sex/snuggles, so this was bound to appeal to me.

I am a total sucker for it...*purrs* The picture was...very inspiring.

I have a few theories about kryptonian sex and floating but this probably is the time or place to get into it :P

I agree. I think a fic would be a nice place to get into it, though... *looks coaxing*

[genclay]

I am a total sucker for it...*purrs* The picture was...very inspiring

The picture had my jaw dropping to my desk. It's a damn good thing I'm on my own today in the office.

Hmmmm, that would be a fun thing to do. I've been trying to work on something a bit darker than what i normally do. It's been slow, hard work. Time for a bit of fun maybe? :P

[laramoon]

Hmmmm, that would be a fun thing to do. I've been trying to work on something a bit darker than what i normally do. It's been slow, hard work. Time for a bit of fun maybe?

*taps foot* then I'll expect to see stories from you landing in my inbox soon. Very soon. ;)

[laramoon]

awww, poor overworked, overstressed Superman. *giggles* No, really, if this is what one gets for working oneself to the point of exhaustion...I'm starting right now, and working myself down the the bone!! hehehe.

I love how Clark got there and went all "this isn't an emergency," and "I have other things to do." That's SO like him. And I love how sneaky Bruce is, pretending it to be an emergency.

And oh yeah, snuggling while hovering above ground is definitely on the list of things that'll put a silly grin on my face. (in fact, ooh, look, there it is! LOL)

Lovely story - thanks for sharing! :D

[jij]

awww, poor overworked, overstressed Superman. *giggles* No, really, if this is what one gets for working oneself to the point of exhaustion...I'm starting right now, and working myself down the the bone!! hehehe.

I was feeling kind of stressed and tired when I wrote it, so it was really nice to imagine a mini-vacation!

I love how Clark got there and went all "this isn't an emergency," and "I have other things to do." That's SO like him.

I know it's usually Bruce that's seen as the one that resists fun times, but I can fairly easily imagine a dynamic where Bruce insists on some relaxation for sheerly pragmatic reasons and Kal's the one that drives himself too hard. They're both stubborn workaholics and can be blind to their own needs!

And yeah, I so agree that floating cuddling is fun, fun, fun. How could anyone resist? Bruce certainly can't, lol...

Glad you liked! Rai was very inspiring. :)

[icarus_chained]

Okay, first? HOT! That is all.

And second ... I love the jungle in this, the flowers and the scents and the tastes, the descriptions of your Eden. It feels ... vivid and sparkling and real, something rich and earthy to ground them. And then not, of course ;)

Third ... oh J'onn! I'm sure you meant it completely innocently, and had no idea what Bruce would choose to make of your well-meant advice ... *snort*

And fourth ... I agree. Floating Clark, drapped in satiated Bruce ... *hums happily* Where was I again? Oh, right. *grin*

And Rai's art ... tasty! The pair of you!

[jij]

I love the jungle in this, the flowers and the scents and the tastes, the descriptions of your Eden.

DaMo and I spent a wonderful week in Palau a handful of years ago and it's been a wonderful memory to be able to access! Mmmmm...

Third ... oh J'onn! I'm sure you meant it completely innocently, and had no idea what Bruce would choose to make of your well-meant advice ... *snort*

Oh, of course! J'onn was quite clueless about the nearly-electrical levels of sexual tension between the two. :)

Floating cuddling...Rai's art just made me grin like a loon, so inspiring...*happy sigh*

Thanks so much for the comment! *hugs and grins*

[saavikam77]

This. Yes. O_O

I've been so horrible with my feedback lately - think all my neurons have been fried by all the good fic. XD

This was just wonderful. I LOVE Bruce getting Clark to relax like this. ^_~ And the art! Simply fantastic. :D

*applauds*

[jij]

I haven't been great with my feedback lately either, so I understand! *hugs*

The art was soooo inpsiring, and I was in the mood for Bruce to be bossy and yet accessable at the same time. :) Glad you enjoyed!