Comments | jij: Fic: Gotham Nocturne, Chapter 2/9 (Music of the Spheres)

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Fic: Gotham Nocturne, Chapter 2/9 (Music of the Spheres)

Feb 11, 2008 17:18

Title: Gotham Nocturne: Chapter Two
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Series Notes: Gotham Nocturne is part of The Music of the Spheres, a combined Superman Returns/Batman Begins series. The whole series can be found here.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jim Gordon has a visitor among the trash ( Read more... )

fic, mots

Comments 41

loqia February 11 2008, 08:47:43 UTC

... aaah.

After the train wreck that was today, all I can say is: Thank you. Thank you so much.

jij February 11 2008, 13:37:18 UTC

Aw...*hugs* I'm happy to have made your day a touch brighter--it sounds like it was horrible...

wachey February 11 2008, 08:57:35 UTC

OH yeah!! Is Bruce Wayne's birthday the 19th?? I think it is...

Anyway, wow, what an exciting/lustfilled/plain wonderful chapter!! Bruce really knows how to...give.

Can't wait for more!

jij February 11 2008, 13:40:18 UTC

It is the 19th! And I'm almost done with that chapter! :)

Bruce really knows how to...give.

Mmm, he's good at apologizing for his terrible, terrible defects as a boyfriend. *grins*

Glad you liked!

wachey February 11 2008, 20:53:31 UTC

Ah good!! I'm giving a speech that day, and now I know I can mention it to everyone :3

littlepunkryo February 11 2008, 09:35:08 UTC

God I love this series. It always sucks me right back in. ♥

jij February 11 2008, 13:42:37 UTC

Yay! I've been looking forward to getting back to this series for so long and it's so fun to write when it gets clicking...and Kal in the Fortress almost always clicks for me. :) Thanks for reading and commenting!

goldenrat84 February 11 2008, 09:49:22 UTC

Kal really acts the alien lord in this chapter. They are so hot together!!!

jij February 11 2008, 13:46:56 UTC

Hah, I realized when writing a later chapter and comparing it to this one that this relationship is almost a Kal/Bruce/Clark threesome, with Kal the top, Clark the bottom, and Bruce the switch. Which is very odd, and yet seems to work somehow. :)

ladybugkay February 11 2008, 12:54:06 UTC

Uh...huh. Wow. That's just...that's.

That's Batman and Superman role-playing. In the Fortress. For Valentine's Day.

That's freaking hot, that is.

jij February 11 2008, 14:47:06 UTC

Yay! I just cannot get past the fun of the two of them role-playing, somehow. I mean, they have to do it so often, it makes some sense they'd find out it's fun to eroticise it. :)

I started this and realized...I don't think I've ever had them having sex in the movieverse Fortress! Well, in general it just seems so chilly...

*glee* Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am slowly making my way toward your WFGE fic, I swear, but am still something like four days behind on the flist...*facepalm*