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FIC: Trust...But Verify

Nov 03, 2007 13:01

Title: Trust...But Verify
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Batman
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  Clark gets his turn to control Batman.  Or does he?
Word count:  1000
Note:  A PWP continuation from 5 Times Superman was Mind-Controlled and Didn't Try to Kill Batman. and Losing Control.

Bruce Wayne sat in his sparse quarters on the Watchtower, wearing only a ( Read more... )

fic, mind-control

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jij November 3 2007, 12:25:12 UTC
Am I first to comment? Yes!

No! *grin* See, you need to limit your comment to "Wow! Great!" and then you'd have been fine. :) (But I'm glad you didn't, as this comment made me purr with happiness!)

You can just tell there's a part of Bruce that really wants Clark to do this, to just swoop in and steal him away from some boring meeting and have his wicked way with Bruce. Not that Bruce will admit to that, of course. LOL

Oh good, I'm delighted that came across! I was a little afraid Bruce actually sounded relieved instead of "Grumble grumble damn Boy Scout..." :)

Clark making Bruce wave his hand made me laugh; it's such a CLARK thing to do.

It made me snicker; it's such a goofy, innocuous thing to do.

I think it's the most telling that it's not that Bruce chose to put down the switch and acknowledged his trust of Clark; it's that he trusts him on such a basic, implicit, unconscious level, that he isn't even aware of how he feels.

Eeeeeeeeeeee, thank you! That's exactly what I was hoping to capture in this section, so you have filled my day with joy. *dances away*

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