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FIC: 36 Views of Mt. Fuji: Fall (3/9)

Oct 31, 2007 19:51

Title:  36 Views of Mt. Fuji: Fall (3/9)
Pairing:  Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Series Notes:  36 Views of Mt. Fuji is a series set early in Batman and Superman's careers, shortly after the S/B annual #1.  The full series can be found here.
Rating: PG
Summary:  The fledging JLA and Batman deal with ( Read more... )

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iris_summers October 31 2007, 11:39:18 UTC
Am I the first to comment? If so, yay for petty victories! Lol.

Awww... I love the little angsty touches of Woobie!Bruce - the flinch, the emotional shutting down to do what's pragmatic (SO Bats!), the disappointment when Snow White Clark didn't wake up... Go find the bastard and kick some ass, AmgryBats!Style. Hehe. And then come back and be all gruff and schoompy!overprotective with injured Clark. =P

Great work as usual, Jen!

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jij October 31 2007, 13:54:07 UTC
Awww... I love the little angsty touches of Woobie!Bruce - the flinch, the emotional shutting down to do what's pragmatic (SO Bats!), the disappointment when Snow White Clark didn't wake up...

Eeee, thanks! I'm glad the woobie came through in the first part--it's so hard to tell, sometimes, if it's coming through, if it's too head-poundingly obvious, or what! Being pragmatic is a survival technique with him--it's when he's most brutally pragmatic you can be sure he's dealing with some really strong emotion.

Ass-kicking, them comfort! Bruce has his priorities straight...

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intrepidcat October 31 2007, 11:41:42 UTC
*Slaps Flash and Hal*
Cause they almost made Bruse CRY. And Batman does not cry. He saves Superman.

Right? *sniff*

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jij October 31 2007, 13:59:24 UTC
*shields Hal and Barry* They're just...uh...being guys! Not-in-love guys! But thanks, I'm glad Bruce's quivering lower lip came through without having to mention it explicitly (he would have killed me!)

He's off to the rescue! Righteous ass-kicking!

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loqia October 31 2007, 12:07:49 UTC
Someone's totally gonna get Batowned in the next chapter...

Poor silly Bruce; big romantic woobie didn't work so it's time for merciless ass kicking! And Clark, my fine fictional friend, you better've been listening 'cause I don't think you're going to get that confession again.

/sniffles herself to sleep.

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jij October 31 2007, 14:06:05 UTC
Poor silly Bruce; big romantic woobie didn't work so it's time for merciless ass kicking!

My Bruce!muse is, I suspect, almost relieved! Kicking ninja ass is much easier than being...(ugh)...open and honest about feelings.

And Clark, my fine fictional friend, you better've been listening 'cause I don't think you're going to get that confession again.

He hasn't told me if he could hear that yet! *nudges unconscious Clark* Hello, Earth to Krypton? Update me, here...

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dm_wyatt October 31 2007, 14:28:30 UTC
Wow...

So sad and so sweet the way that Bruce confessed his love to Clark. I actually teared up.

*sniff*

I hope that some part of Clark heard him and that it will give him some strength to fight the soul taker!

But boy, I can't wait to see what happens when Bruce catches up with Kyodai Ken! An angry bat can be scary...

Go Bruce! Save Clark!

*waves closed fist*

Kick some ninja butt!

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jij November 1 2007, 10:51:36 UTC
So sad and so sweet the way that Bruce confessed his love to Clark. I actually teared up.

Yay! (I always feel so guilty for being happy I made people tear up!)

I hope that some part of Clark heard him and that it will give him some strength to fight the soul taker!

We'll get some of Clark's POV in a couple of chapters...Bruce helps. :)

And huzzah for kicking ninja butt! I really, really hope to get to finish that scene this weekend...(I'm in mid-kick!)

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yamheads October 31 2007, 15:02:30 UTC
Though part of me is wishes Bruce wouldn't be so calculating all the time, the other part of me is going, "YES!!" Because that is exactly what Batman would do. He'd have the whole situation sorted out in a few moments, explain WHY he is totally right in seconds and get everyone to agree with him. Yes!!

And here I am thinking Bruce is going to be all calculating the entire chapter but no! He's totally human in the last bit. Love what he says to Clark. Touching, to say the least! :P And c'mon, Katana, you hang in there!

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jij November 1 2007, 10:58:24 UTC
Though part of me is wishes Bruce wouldn't be so calculating all the time, the other part of me is going, "YES!!"

(My pained confession: all the activeness in this scene was my beta's adding! I mostly had him stand around, dumbstruck!) But that is exactly how Batman deals with things like this--by putting Bruce away someplace inside and doing what has to be done to cut through the chaos. It's both frustrating and exactly what I love about him! (But I was happy I got a chance to write him being openly woobie as well!)

*hugs* Thanks so much for the comment!

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