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Ficlet: Losing Control

Oct 18, 2007 20:32

Title: Losing Control
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Batman
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Clark learns mind-control can be a lot of fun, when done properly.
Word count: 930
Note: A PWP continuation from 5 Times Superman was Mind-Controlled and Didn't Try to Kill Batman.

Superman was lying on his narrow cot in his sparse Watchtower quarters. His ( Read more... )

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Comments 41

louiex October 18 2007, 12:45:08 UTC

Oh hot and extremely naughty! Its like Batman got to play with his very own life-size Superman sex doll :D Glad he's at least a believer in reciprocation~

jij October 18 2007, 14:56:36 UTC

Its like Batman got to play with his very own life-size Superman sex doll

@.@ That's a hysterical way of putting it, I love it! *grins* Oh Bruce, you kinky boy, getting a Superman Real Doll at last...

louiex October 18 2007, 15:09:55 UTC

That icon is very appropriate and insanely adorable :D I wouldn't put it past Bruce to have a robot Superman sex doll that he kept in utter secret as this was before he and Clark hooked up perhaps XD

greeneyelove October 18 2007, 14:11:43 UTC

Yummy!

Silly boys, just get together and jump one another silly.

This was wonderfully hot. Seems Bats does know how to play, doesn't he?

jij October 18 2007, 14:57:56 UTC

Silly boys, just get together and jump one another silly.

Bruce can be decidedly...indirect. And playful! If still very, very silly... :)

ladybugkay October 18 2007, 14:28:29 UTC

Oh, yeah. Very hot, and Superman shows a lot of trust to let Batman just take over THAT completely.

You are going to write another sequel, aren't you? Because you know you can't leave it here.

jij October 18 2007, 15:00:21 UTC

Superman shows a lot of trust to let Batman just take over THAT completely.

Yeah, I started to write it and realized that he'd probably find it a bit panicky at first, and for good reason, to be honest. It's handing over one of the world's greatest weapons to someone, after all...

You are going to write another sequel, aren't you? Because you know you can't leave it here.

*grin* It does seem to beg for a continuation, doesn't it? I'm definitely hoping to write a third part to bring it all the way around...

vespa331 October 18 2007, 15:03:27 UTC

Damn if Bruce doesn't know how to conduct the sexiest secret affair ever dreamed by man.

Typo: Was this the way it would be now, a sort of long-distance affair which Bruce would never have to fully acknowledge?
You repeated that kiddo.

jij October 18 2007, 15:06:04 UTC

*grins* Bruce always knows to do things the sexiest way known to man! That's his secret superpower!

And eek, thanks for catching that, I have no idea what happened there. *tilts head in confusion after a hasty fix*

vespa331 October 18 2007, 16:20:21 UTC

Hey, didn't you post a link to the Batman/Superman story on The Batman? I can't find it. I found the first part, but I can't find the second episode. :P I must see what Lex does to Clark while he's under his power, other than slap him and make him kneel...*cough*. That show is so weird. Clark Kent is adorable, but Superman being a bigger jerk than Batman freaks me right out. Robin is cute too, but "Kickin!"? Who the hell writes this stuff? It's like someone who was a teen a couple decades ago is trying really hard to write how the "hip kids" of today talk (quotes by old guy writing this show), and failing utterly. It's also kinda freaky to hear the JLAnimated voices coming out of the new designs. Dude, there's a guy named Lex Lang doing a voice, that's insane, he totally got that job just because of his name. :D Does Batgirl kinda remind you of Spoiler? Ok I'll stop babbling now.

vespa331 October 18 2007, 16:33:14 UTC

Ok, I'm gonna ask you cause I can't find it - Did Micheal Rosenbaum do the voice for the mayor on that ep? Cause it kinda sounds like him, but it's not credited anywhere.

jij October 19 2007, 06:23:45 UTC

Oh, I have no idea! It's always possible, though--he does a lot of voices on these things (but you think they'd give him credit, lol). Maybe he just stopped by on a lark and they gave him a few lines. :)

vespa331 October 18 2007, 17:36:26 UTC

I found the ep on YouTube.
BATMAN TAUGHT SUPERMAN THE VALUE OF TEAMWORK. o_0 It warmed my heart when Batman had so K hidden, I was like "Oh good, the Batman I know and love is in there somewhere." That ep was so full of fanwank. Superman was a little resistant last night. Lex, oh my god! This is a kid's show you dirty dirty man! Just...wow. This show breaks my brain.

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