[fic] Sky - 1/1
This is for izon_no_niwa - she requested it and it's her birthday. Happy birthday! Hope you like this~ ♥
Title: Sky
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ni~ya x Sakito
Comments: AU, based on the song and video for Sky by Loveholic. It's a little bit sad, but not quite like the video. X3
( When I look at the sky... )
Title: Sky
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ni~ya x Sakito
Comments: AU, based on the song and video for Sky by Loveholic. It's a little bit sad, but not quite like the video. X3
( When I look at the sky... )
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First paragraphs I was worried if I'm going to encounter death but I was cackling like mad since it was my birthday. I had a sulky day in school but coming home and checking the netz made me feel better, haha.
I had to pause and hit my head somewhere somehow everytime I am reminded of the video... not to mention I was playing the song while reading this.
“I thought it would be the perfect time to say I love you,” Niya added quietly, watching Sakito rather than the display. “In case you wanted to know….” --- Made me melt. Really. U__U
All the references to the video really made my day, and it felt like dream come true. And it somehow came to me that this reminds me of my own writing... that one piece of mine with many, many flashbacks. You write so well that you can just make the reader come away with you :O
Oh, and you managed to make a plot out of the song. Actually, while watching it at some of the brave times in my life, I still didn't quite understood why and why this and that happened, but you made a wonderful story out of it! *clings*
And I like how frail and fragile Sakito appeared in this story... add that big, cuddly bear and we get the neurotic girl in the video, lol. I'd definitely raise my eyebrows at that if the big bear was here, haha!!!
I really love it~ when you told me you're almost done, it had been my source of momentary happiness when I'm feeling alone in school... and that helped me wait for this day despite being sick and busy and all. Thanks a lot, really~ ♥♥♥*hugs*♥
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And I don't do deathfics, so no worries with there. The dog was a tempting addition, but then I completely forgot about it later. I guess it would have been kind of weird in this, huh? To happyfluffy for the mood, perhaps. I'm really glad my interpretation of the story made sense, it took me quite a while to figure out how to make this not a deathfic and what could have happened to make Ni all beat up. It worked out, I guess! XD
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