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Ficlet - The O.C. - Guilty Conscience - Chapter 1 (Trey/Seth)

Apr 18, 2010 14:24

Title: Guilty Conscience
Author: Jewel21
Rating: Hard R for sexual situations
Show: The O.C.
Genre: Angst/Slash
Pairing: Seth/Trey
Type: WIP
Summary: An unforeseeable event sends Trey and Seth back to Orange County.

A/N: This story contains slash. If you are offended by such pairings, please don't read. This story also follows after my series ‘ ( Read more... )

fanfic: o.c.

Comments 9

chrisear April 19 2010, 00:47:58 UTC

love ur stories.... curious to see how the parents will react

jewel21 April 19 2010, 09:53:03 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!!

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jewel21 April 19 2010, 21:32:39 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :D

chase65 April 22 2010, 06:48:28 UTC

So Ch. 1 means more to come right. I enjoyed that. I don't think I've read any Trey/Seth so it's cool to see this. Thane for the read.

jewel21 April 22 2010, 21:57:49 UTC

Hi there!

I'm happy that you're enjoying the story :D And to answer your question, yes there is more to come. There are five chapters in all, and they're all written, it's just a matter of my beta going through them. I hope to post a chapter a week.

Thank you again for your feedback!!

chase65 April 30 2010, 21:42:24 UTC

I see that Ch.2 is up so I'll be getting into that shortly :-) . I did go back and read the prequel for this and enjoyed that too. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

jewel21 May 1 2010, 02:27:55 UTC

Thanks so much for the kind words :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I don't get a lot of feedback so I'm never sure whether people like it or not, lol. Chapter 3 will be up by Sunday at the latest.

Thanks again!

dogsbody01 May 27 2010, 18:00:53 UTC

Mein Gott en Himmel!You've certainly packed a lot into the first chapter:Smut(with just the right touch of fluff),conflict(Ryan knowing all about Seth and Trey,but not not telling;with the eventually, of Kirsten and Sandy finding out looming, on the horizon),an elephant in the room(Seth still doesn't know, that Ryan ordered Trey out of Newport;and all but forbade Trey.From ever having seeing or being with Seth again).And topped it off,with a tragedy,that's going to be the first serious test, of Seth and Trey's relationship.
I can't wait, to read what happens next.

jewel21 May 30 2010, 22:59:54 UTC

LOL. Yeah, I guess I did pack a lot of stuff in there, lol. I really am happy that you're enjoying the story. Hopefully you'll like the ending as well ;)