Comments | jesusluvsjaeho: first smut in....months

jesusluvsjaeho

first smut in....months

May 29, 2011 14:55

Title: My Turn
Pairing: Cheondoong/Mir
Rating: NC-17
For: ilovewonbin
Request: Cheondoong wants to top so he surprise-attacks Mir. Mir is VERY sensitive on his nipples and Cheondoong has a nipple fetish.

( ...oblivious to his observer as he flicked on the bedside lamp... )

pairing: cheondong/mir, mblaq!fic

Comments 9

ilovewonbin May 29 2011, 23:31:51 UTC

SPOT!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!

jesusluvsjaeho May 30 2011, 02:40:48 UTC

i hope you like it. i'm sorry it took me so long to write it. my muses weren't feeling active recently.

chevy_the_geek May 30 2011, 03:23:36 UTC

WOW! Very nice, very nice indeed! :)

jesusluvsjaeho May 30 2011, 16:31:16 UTC

thanks!

cho_sungmin October 21 2011, 20:36:55 UTC

Mir... don't ask so stupid things like that, after so damn hot sex with ur Doongie! XD

I really like the way, Cheondung get's to top ♥
kekeke~
thank you so much for it!
I really like your writting

so, I will read your others too :)

jesusluvsjaeho October 22 2011, 17:09:54 UTC

glad you liked it!

thank you liking my writing. ^___^ and for taking the time to comment.

cho_sungmin October 24 2011, 00:00:45 UTC

and again:

you're welcome ^^
you write really great!
Pretty smoothly and it reads really well! ♥

kay_dalle April 29 2012, 02:20:22 UTC

It's official, you have the best endings ever: "Couldn't we have done this before my shower?"
xD

jesusluvsjaeho April 29 2012, 04:10:35 UTC

thank you! i like to have interesting, shocking, or amusing endings. though sometimes i just don't know how to end a fic so i leave it where my brain stops. hahaha.