a request

[jesusluvsjaeho]

Title: Hot Chocolate, Snow, and Thee
Pairing: Yoseob/Hyunseung
Rating: PG
A/N: for louvela as requested at here

Comments

[louvela]

Oh god!
I freakin' love this!!!! It's really cute! A bit angsty and really fluffy and OMG I squealed like a ... girl (yeah I'm a girl xD).

Maybe it was Yoseob magic, he thought.
Yoseob's magic is real! Always able to bring smiles to others! I love this sentence ^^

Over and over they went with some help, Hyunseung strongly suspected, from the blond monkey holding onto him. At the bottom, they slid to a halt and Yoseob flopped on his back in the snow. He was giggling like a little kid. A strange pressure build up in Hyunseung's chest and tickled his throat. He blinked rapidly thinking he was on the verge of tears - from the trauma of rolling around in snow. Then a gut-deep laugh bubbled out of his mouth. Next thing he knew he was collapsed against Yoseob while they giggled and laughed until tears leaked down their cheeks.
This part is my favorite! It is really cute <3

And I love how Yoseob forced the others to go out just to spend time with Seungie <3 It was so funny to read it! And Dongwoon at the end, I was laughing so much

[jesusluvsjaeho]

yay! i'm so glad you love it. it's my first attempt at a full Beast fic so i was really nervous.

the line about "Yoseob magic" just popped out when i was typing the story up (i wrote it longhand in class). i'm glad it works. ^___^

hehehe. that was one of my favorite parts to write. i could see them rolling down a slight hill, Yoseob all wrapped around Hyunseung. then both of them ending up in giggles at the bottom. it's the scene the rest of the fic is really written around.

Dongwoon at the end was another one of those unexpected happenings that occur when i write. i thought it would end with the kissing but no. Dongwoon showed up. <.<;;

thank you for requesting this! it was a fun request to write. plus, requests often help me feel inspired to write. XD

thanks! i'm thrilled you think it's lovely. &hearts

[louvela]

Oh yes, it works!!!
This scene kkk~ I can imagine them too. Yoseob wrapped around Seungie... *imagine*
You're welcome. And if you want some requests tell me, my mind is full of ideas xDD
I read this again when I was back from work and again, it's really lovely. I really love this fic ^^

[jesusluvsjaeho]

if you want to make some requests, i'd be willing to try to write them. XD

i'm so happy it is still a lovely fic after the second read. :D