my muses are getting morbid

May 28, 2010 23:44

Pairing: Seungho/Joon
Rating: PG
Warning: character death...guns...

gun in hand )

mblaq!fic, pairing: joon/seungho

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charisma1869 March 27 2011, 14:44:30 UTC
I hate Seing Ho in this fic!!
TT^TT

Now I have to kill him!!

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jesusluvsjaeho March 27 2011, 18:18:21 UTC
>.<;;

only kill the fictional seungho since the real one didn't do anything. ;-)

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charisma1869 March 27 2011, 23:09:07 UTC
Will do!!
XDD

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echoevader April 20 2011, 00:10:25 UTC
AIYEE! How could Seungho do that? Did he PAY Changsun to kill her and then just spin around and say that he couldn't bring himself to kill her yet he could kill him?!?

"If this is love, he thinks, the poets lied with their pretty words of heat and passion and painful joy. This, whatever this is, lacks warmth, emotion, spontaneity."

Wow... Simply wow... I'm speechless. In a good way!

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jesusluvsjaeho April 20 2011, 01:45:16 UTC
ahhaha. yea. that's basically it. even though seungho paid changsun to kill seungho's ex-girlfriend, he (seungho) couldn't forgive changsun for actually doing it. even though, yes, seungho wished he could do it himself. changsun did it because he loved seungho (the money didn't hurt matters...lol). so seungho couldn't actually kill the girl because he loved her but he could kill changsun because he didn't love him.

phew! that is the first time i've tried to explain that plot. lol.

thanks, bb! i'm glad you're speechless in a good way. especially since this was sort of an experiment in writing style. (and my own twisted interpretation and spin on the "Y" video. hahaha)

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granitemouth September 19 2011, 03:52:17 UTC
whoa~ dark!

anyhow, I still like it. If this stretches into a series, I think it will get better, ^^

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jesusluvsjaeho September 19 2011, 05:42:30 UTC
glad you like it even if it is dark.

honestly, i wouldn't even know how to stretch this into a series. >.<;;

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vipshawol December 12 2011, 23:08:18 UTC
kahkskjthaklth omfg this is really good. :'D
so dark and angsty and poetic (using the word 'poetic' seems ironic in this case) and i love it <3
I love the first line~~ Absolutely gorgeous and bittersweet and goes straight to the point. It's true, love is so complicated sob.
Love this! You're great, stay gorgeous. ;D

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jesusluvsjaeho December 13 2011, 00:12:09 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting! <3

i'm glad you enjoyed this little drabble so much. ^___^

so dark and angsty and poetic i love this compliment so hard right now. especially since i don't do dark and angsty very often. i'm glad to know this worked for you. :D

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