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jesterdala

fic; sound breaks the spell

Sep 09, 2009 23:22

fic; sound breaks the spell
Wizards of Waverly Place
Author: JesterDala
Pairings/Characters: Justin/Alex
Rating: PG, language
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: if they make no sound, they can't be heard
Notes: I have no idea of the age difference between the two, so these ages are entirely my own

( if they make no sound, they can't be heard )

jalex|but you love me anyway, fic|the written word

Comments 4

lonewonderslove September 10 2009, 06:41:45 UTC

Wow! I'm totally in love with the way you wrote this! The stream of consciousness style makes it seem all the more realistic, which is really wonderful. Justin's voice sounds very authentic, and I definitely believed his feelings. The description of the heat Alex created in Justin's body compared to the fires of Hell were really apt as well. Fantastic work! :D

By the way, I think Justin and Alex are only a year or two apart. It hasn't been explicitly explained, but there's not that big of a difference. My personal opinion is that there's only one year's difference, but it may feel like more, depending on where their birthdays fall in the year.

jesterdala September 10 2009, 17:00:11 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! :D I always thought that Justin would be the one feeling more guilty than Alex would, so it makes sense that he'd be thinking about eternal consequences when all she wants to do it get it on. xD

sandalaris September 10 2009, 14:56:10 UTC

Wow, this was just amazing. The thought patteren was beautiful. And there was a pretty-but-twisted quality to it. Really got you caught up.

I've always assumed they were two years apart. In the first episode, Justin says he's sixteen, and I don't know if Alex actually ever said she was fourteen, but I know she's not sixteen til just before the movie. So maybe it's only a year? I don't know, but three years work.

jesterdala September 10 2009, 16:59:37 UTC

Really happy that that's the feeling that came from it. I didn't want it to seem like they were both just peachy keen with what was going down, but I didn't want any sort of squick to get in the way of how pretty Jalex is, either. So I'm glad it balanced out. :)

Thanks for the age info. I never really paid close attention to their ages in the show, but I think I'll go back and change the gap to two years. You know, it's probably all the fic that's messing me up. In all the stories I've read, they're always around two years apart. Confusion!

Love your icon, btw.
Seems to fit most of my fandom couples. Haha!