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Like a Breakaway

Aug 18, 2009 21:43

Title: Like a Breakaway
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portisheart August 19 2009, 08:20:21 UTC

cool start! totally new universe for me, never read naruto so far. but it doesn't matter, your charas were decribed good enough for me to see the scene.
but you are sooo cruel! all these smexxy warnings - and then nope, nada! *tongue hanging out* XDD
waiting for more!!

lenka_san August 19 2009, 23:53:47 UTC

Oh, I think, this piece is what got me to seek you on LJ, isn´t it? I have a feeling I have already read this chapter on AFF, still very good :D I would love to see more of it :)

jessy_suki August 20 2009, 00:42:11 UTC

Yeah, the first one I posted on AFF.net Need to do more, but the semester started, so...lets hope. I intend to work on it soon.

roz_chan August 20 2009, 02:57:53 UTC

Nice start! You've managed to keep everyone really in character. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!