What Makes A Family

Mar 21, 2013 15:13

Title: What Makes A Family
Author: jeri_1116
Rating: G
Word Count: 3,056
Beta: seajellybaby
Summary: Luke and Noah don't mind sharing.
Notes: Written for the new community nukeminibang. Also thank you to random_nic for hosting this and helping to keep Nuke alive. :)
Disclaimer: I owns nothing, nada, zilch. But let's be clear.... if I did, Noah never would've went blind, him and Luke ( Read more... )

fanfic: [alternate universe], alt luke/noah jade, nukeminibang

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123cariad March 22 2013, 15:14:29 UTC
Aww absoulutly fabulous story .. love that you have everyone involved in some way Reid , Casey .. Jade as the stroppy pregnant fed up with life the universe and itself lol you captured them all so wonderfully Fingers crossed we get a follow on would love to read about Jade giving birth lol that would be something lol

I really am in awe of you writing talent Arsena you amaze me xx

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jeri_1116 April 16 2013, 15:28:57 UTC
Awe Stella, you say such sweet things. Thanks bb and thanks for reading.

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cindyls1969 March 22 2013, 15:47:39 UTC
Oh good lord, this is too adorable. And the picture is beautiful. I love the idea of babymama Jade.

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jeri_1116 April 16 2013, 15:29:27 UTC
Thanks for reading Cindy.

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random_nic March 22 2013, 16:11:04 UTC
Noah being wary of giving the Mayer name to the baby is completely in character. He always struggled to come to terms with the kind of man his father was, and the fear that the his father's evil could somehow be within him. It stands to reason he'd want his child as separated from the Colonel as possible.

Luke making Noah see the positive that could come from this - that Noah and their child can make the Mayer name count for something good - is absolutely what he'd do. Luke always tried to make Noah see that he's nothing like his father, no matter their blood ties. And somehow, I don't think Noah will be disappointed that it's a boy...

What makes your writing stand out is that it's never the same or predictable. You can move back and forth from schmoopfests to angstfic with no problems, and that's not easy. And you never let yourself be constrained by convention. As much as I hate to admit it (because it's much more fun to give you shit) - awesome job, dear.

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jeri_1116 April 16 2013, 15:34:35 UTC
Thanks for going deep in your comment. I really needed that. Can you feel the sarcasm I inserted there? No? Well I tried. Kisses.

Thanks for reading wife. You are always up on your duties. Ha! Duties. Speaking of.... wait that's private.

Anyway, THANK YOU!

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valenti1965 March 22 2013, 17:29:33 UTC
Luciano/Luke...but most of all this baby has the right name - Lucky. Lucky to have three wonderful parents not to mention numerous relations on hand and friends to help out! Absolutely loved this so much and the artwork...OMG...amazing!

You rock dialogue Arsena and this is one of my all times fav's of yours. Just love them all waiting for that one special person who will change all their lives and bringing so much love to it!

I am going to add my name to list for more :-)

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jeri_1116 April 16 2013, 15:38:55 UTC
Thanks Lou, I always love your comments- makes me feel good, about what I write. Thank you for reading. Yeah, the art work is good, but Gill is responsible for that, and well you know she's awesome.

Kisses.

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scj0710 March 22 2013, 17:30:12 UTC
Smiling the whole time I read this.... Noah saying "He doesn’t know how not to be emotional" about Luke made me laugh out loud. You captured Luke and Noah's love and Jade's "fierce attitude" perfectly. I only have three other words to add: Lucky is adorable!!

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jeri_1116 April 16 2013, 15:40:28 UTC
Awe thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked. I had to add that line, because it's really Luke in a nutshell.

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