title: and days die young when you're gone (and you're gone)
chapters: (1/1)
fandom: the vampire diaries
character/pairing: klaus/caroline, tyler/caroline, rebekah, elijah
rating: R (or strong T, whichever)
word count: ~7000
summary: "We want the unattainable. Yes, we do. Foolishly. Hopelessly. All the time."
le notes: this is the companion piece to
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Okay, okay, I know you have fears about this, but I want to say that for me it was perfect. I really really really loved this.
And I think you do such an amazing job of getting into Klaus' head here. There's so many layers to him and how his mind works, and how how mind flits from one emotion to the next, how he so easily slides from one thought to the other in how he perceives everything around him. I think it's so great how you have him at times being very accommodating because there's no reason for him to be intimidated at all by Tyler or others, and then at times he's completely angry and in that anger.
And Caroline is wonderful here. I love her defiance and yet there's a part of her that wants and is intrigued because Caroline is still that girl who wants to be picked first and to be loved.
LAMP POST!
And then, of course, as you do so well, you have the siblings that run through this and Rebekah's words are so very powerful and strong.
Anywho, I could go on and on, but I just wanted to say that I really did love this.
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you
are so yummy
let
me love you
now
yes
i am a creep
but
it is all for you
bb
edit: also poetry sux
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