16. hoppípolla (3/6)

Mar 18, 2012 00:49

title: hoppípolla (3/6)
fandom: the vampire diaries
characters/pairing: klaus/caroline, tyler/caroline, stefan, damon, tyler, rebekah
rating: t
genre: romance, angst, drama, humour, friendship (because i can't stay away from my ot3)
word count: ~5700
spoilers: none.
summary: "Do you remember what I told you, the night of the ball? The world's going to ( Read more... )

fanfiction, character: klaus mikaelson, character: tyler lockwood, character: caroline forbes, character: stefan salvatore, pairing: tyler/caroline, character: damon salvatore, fandom: the vampire diaries, character: rebekah mikaelson, pairing: klaus/caroline

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ishi_chan March 17 2012, 17:21:09 UTC
Yaaay, you updated! :D

Caroline's interactions with the Salvatores will be my favourite forever!

I probably should have gotten that the girl in the supermarket from last chapter was supposed to be a doppelganger, but somehow that didn't occur to me at all XD Don't know whether I'm happy about a new one, I just hope it won't be the same old Doppelganger/Salvatore triangle.

Oh and Caroline pleading with Tyler broke my heart. I could practically hear the desperation in her voice.

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jeremy_finch March 17 2012, 17:23:58 UTC
Oh, let me assure you it won't be a Doppelganger/Salvatore triangle. I was going for a twist there - not sure I achieved it; I was having second thoughts about putting her in at all (but then I thought a passing mention would just be no use either, so...) here it is. Any more thoughts on the doppelganger thing? :/

I'm glad you liked it either way! AND YAY FOR BEING FIRST COMMENTER? :)

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ishi_chan March 17 2012, 17:28:21 UTC
xD I love the icon btw

I don't really have any thoughts on doppelgangers tbh :) I don't mind them much except for the thing I complain about all the time anyway (not gonna repeat myself for the 1000th time, I'm sure it's getting old by now XD).
I can imagine Caroline being curious though. It must be hard knowing that a girl looking exactly like your best friend (who's dead) is out there.

I'm almost always the first lately, at least on entries posted during my waking hours :) This will probably come to an end by monday though since I have Physiology lab then *sigh*

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jeremy_finch March 17 2012, 17:33:15 UTC
I KNOW, I LOVE IT TOO. Been using it everywhere I comment lately :p

And tbh I didn't even want to write a doppelganger story, it just kind of wrote itself yaknow? u_u I'll do my best with it, though so stick around!

gosh I feel like Ryan Secreast right now.

and nooooooo monday please never come. My Big Senior Year Exam results come out on Wednesday after waiting four fricken months for it. That's why I'm updating a lot - I won't be on for three months or so starting the nd of this month? Or late April? Idk. Sigh.

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silvereyed101 March 17 2012, 19:42:24 UTC
JEREMY NOOOO!!!!! ngl, I actually started crying just then.

Also why are you leaving for 3 months? You should wait until the end of the TVD season until you leave us.-nods decisively-

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jeremy_finch March 18 2012, 07:28:43 UTC
urgh, some boot camp thing. but i already begged asked my parents to try and get me out of it, so it's not definite yet.

thanks for the review mi amor <3

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jeremy_finch March 18 2012, 07:27:27 UTC
I KNOW I WAS SOBBING INTERNALLY WHEN I WROTE THAT SCENE BUT I HAD TO ALRIGHT you shall see why.

Well, my mindcanon thinks it fell off when Tyler twisted/broke his arm behind his back, or in the struggle, all that jazz. I also think that if someone rips their heart out, the rings would be considered null and void, but I wanted to add that line in to make it all ~dramatic~.

and three months - is kind of a long time - for a teenager like me - especially as there shall be no internet - or phone coverage ;-;

THANK YOU SO MUCH, I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT :) <3

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jeremy_finch March 18 2012, 07:32:08 UTC
since i'm pretty sure you're not a 58-year-old man from yemen,. sure :D i'll message you the link.

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jeremy_finch March 18 2012, 07:37:54 UTC
URGH I AM SO EXCITED


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oltha_heri March 19 2012, 16:31:29 UTC
The opening of this, THE OPENING OF THIS, HOW CAN I EVEN BEGIN TO EXPLAIN THE AMOUNT OF LOVE!

In the late afternoons, when she and Rebekah turn endless cartwheels across the rolling greens, she fancies herself as Elizabeth Bennett. When Kol goads her into throwing pebbles at Elijah and Finn practicing their sword fighting from around the corner of the house, she giggles only the way Marianne Dashwood would. And when Klaus guides her to a secluded corner of the gardens - eyes forward, hands lingering towards hers that lay stiff at her sides: not touching, never touching-and draws her while she tends to the sages Finn seems to have an odd attachment to, she dares to let herself feel like Emma Woodhouse. Worldly, spirited, beautiful.Just that whole paragraph, I LOVE ALL OF IT. FInn/Sage shout out combined with Austen metaphors, how is that perfection EVEN IN THIS WORLD ( ... )

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jeremy_finch March 19 2012, 16:55:43 UTC
Your reviews leave me way too flattered, that is quite a problem. Here, HAVE A SONG.

I'm glad you're liking dark!Klaroline :D It's interesting, because I don't do darkness much, so I'm just messing around, finding my niche here. I pretty much have this whole story outlined, I just need to do is write it out. But that's the problem, because when I do I suddenly get all these other ideas and sometimes I stray from them and then I just force myself to be all BITCH CALM YOSELF and make it into a whole other story which was the case for my GG/TVD crossover,

And REBEKAH/CAROLINE! I was so excited when Candice said they're going to have more scenes together. I just - I can't even contain my smiley feels. And so far, you're the only one who's excited about Jeremy dying, so now I'm kind of excited about it too XD

Thank you thank you thank you for your reviews, again and again and again.

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