Remix for sanjihan

[jentremix_mod]

Title: Shades of Grey
Rating: G
Group/Pairing: News Tegoshi/Masuda/Kato Friendship
Warnings: None
Notes: I really loved the original story and really wanted to try showing it from Massu's point of view. Hopefully I did it justice. Apologies if I didn't.
Thank you to my beta, tokeruyouna.
Link to Original Story: It's a Black and White World
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Comments

[sanjihan]

I just want to say that one of the most exciting parts about waiting for posting was seeing which fic was chosen to remix and I was pleasantly surprised at your choice. It is one of my favorites and I got the warm fuzzies when I saw which it was. I LOVED getting Massu’s POV and I think you did a wonderful job of preserving the feelings of the first but giving a different insight and I totally loved every word.

He’d hated those years of testing and counselling and watching his mother get more and more distressed at his ‘problem’. She used to tell him all the time that she was doing it for him. That she wanted him to experience all those things in life that he was missing out on. How it upset her that he couldn’t enjoy the world like a normal child.

God, how he had resented that.
THIS was PERFECT. I want to cuddle you senseless right now.

He really wondered if his world was more elegant than theirs.
What beautiful wording. I loved this whole section and how you added in how his sister had been the only one of his family that hadn’t made him resent the fact that he couldn’t see in color. So so sweet.

I was just … trying to see the world from another point of view. Tegoshi gave me the idea.
Lkasjdfl;ar This whole exchange between Massu and Ryo and Shige and Ryo and Massu and Shige was LOVELY. I LOVE that you had Ryo steal the photo of him and Pi and that Massu had handed it to him without even a word. *cuddles them* So precious.

Thank you so much for being good to my baby. XD And thank you for writing something so wonderful. :D