The first snow of the year

Apr 26, 2009 14:04

Title: The first snow of the year
Writer: saengie
Original: The Musician and the Samurai by gothicauthor
Rating: PG-13
Group/Pairing: Kat-tun; Akame
Warnings/Genre: AU
Wordcount: 2.709
A/N: Thanks to bumfucked for the suggestions and the beta. My first remix ever, so I hope I didn't take too many liberties with this or mess it up too bad. *nervous*

Jin is six years old when he is first given music lessons. )

pairing: akanishi jin/kamenashi kazuya, rating: pg-13, group: kat-tun, author: saengie, original author: gothicautor

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gothicauthor May 3 2009, 09:14:25 UTC
sknglkns I'm really glad it inspired you so much. T_T This is seriously beautiful.

WHERE DO I EVEN START.

Um, okay... First things first, I guess. I really loved your characterization of Jin. I feel like that's exactly how I see him in this 'verse. When I first saw Matchy's prompt, I thought it might be interesting to switch it around and have Jin as this calm, collected musician who actually ends up saving samurai Kame instead of the other way around. So in a way, everything kind of stemmed from this image of him, so seeing him fleshed out so beautifully was a real treat.

His background fit so well, too, and just alksnlakng oh, Jin. ;_; And the two of them meeting as children alsknlakgn OF COURSE, NE. THEY ARE TOTALLY MEANT TO BE.

Which reminds me lasknalg THEIR RELATIONSHIP. T_______T You totally nailed their relationship, too. Kame totally makes weird, hot-tempered comments all the time, and Jin is totally just like, "...LOL, what?"

And, and Jin letting Kame have the bigger half of their meal. DDDD:

aknag Now that I've flailed all over the place, um... I really liked your imagery! It's spare but full, like watercolor, and there's such a nice, fleeting quality to it, like impressions, which makes so much sense, since they're traveling around all the time.

BUT ANYWAY THIS WAS JUST SO PRETTY. T____T Thank you so much, ne aslknksg I really like this a lot. ♥ ♥ ♥

GA

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