Speechless. 7 (FINAL)

Nov 06, 2009 18:23

Title: Speechless
Author: hotfruits
Prompt: 12. Excitement at 30emotions
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Keito-centric. HSJ. Keito/Hikaru. Yabu/Takaki.
Disclaimer: Nope
Summary: It was a day like any other day, and the thought that maybe I should be worried never struck me.

AN: Hospital!Keito. A big *GLOMP* to ai_star, hikaru_is_love and candyapplegirls

x-posted to jent_fanfics, hikatorabu, heysay_fanfic and hsj_fics

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g: hey! say! jump, r: pg-13, l: multi-chapter, x: angst

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Comments 11

hibinoasami November 7 2009, 05:47:40 UTC
OHMIGOSH LEMME HUG U KEITO !! *sobs*

he will be the fully engrish boy again !! and i bet once he got his voice again, the first line he'll say is "Hello, Okamoto Keito desu ! " xDD kyaaahhh

hontou ni arigatou for this ^^ *husg and candies*

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hotfruits November 7 2009, 20:17:28 UTC
*noms on candies* <3

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xhina_chanx November 7 2009, 12:31:23 UTC
This story was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!! It almost brought me to tears! I loved every concept of friendship and love and care that Hey!Say!JUMP shares with Keito and with his determination. You're a great writer. I can't explain how much I freakin' L.O.V.E.D. THIS!!!!! <3 <3 <3 xDD

Soon, I will find my voice and I will scream, I will laugh and I will cry and I'll tell my friends and parents everyday that I love them. Once my voice returns, I'll be me again, Okamoto Keito, guitar playing and Engrish gentlemen extraordinaire.

Yes, you will Keito!! And HSJ will be cheering you all along the way! ^.^

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hotfruits November 7 2009, 20:18:00 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this :D
<33

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rayray0826 November 7 2009, 15:37:46 UTC
I really enjoyed this fic! Keito's thoughts were very realistic and the reactions of the HSJ members interacted well with what he was thinking. I hope that Keito fully recovers!

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hotfruits November 7 2009, 20:22:21 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thank you :D

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yaoifanficbish November 26 2009, 01:10:35 UTC
This made me cry T________T
BUT I LOVED IT<3
-I hope he gets his voice back .
I hope he can dance again , walk again .
Gladly , this fic isnt real ! [x

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hotfruits November 26 2009, 01:13:22 UTC
TY! Glad you liked it <3

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maplarojcan February 3 2010, 06:41:38 UTC
X3 pretty.

aw! happy endings make me happy. :)

this is actually one of your prettiest works to date. the construction of your words and the emotions you try to build up are so soft and dainty but strong. :) it gives an overall feeling of loveliness. :) - in short, one of your prettiest works to date.

i love that the love is palpable. it's so concrete. :) and the support. aw the support.

i love hsj. :(

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hotfruits February 3 2010, 07:29:33 UTC
Awe, thank you for the lovely comment :)

Me too.

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