Loneliness (one-shot)

[kajalmonsta]

title: loneliness
pairing: juntoshi (more friendship though)
rating: PG-13 (for the whiskey?)
genre: angst
disclaimer: i just own the plotbunny....his name is lucas...wanna pet him?^^
summary: sometimes someone needs to tell you how lonely you are...*sucks at summarys*
a/n: my first time writing juntoshi, i hope it didn't turn out that bad^^;; also kinda

Comments

[syri_chii]

Awwwwww....
So cute..
Oh-chan, you're so cute.
Aw, Jun? I care for you too, ne??
Sorry for the random words..
Thank you for sharing..
A big big thanks..<3

[kajalmonsta]

lol^^
i like your random words^^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting, i'm really glad you liked it <3

[orenji_kiseki]

There's a lot of pretty and simple dialouges and thoughts here, just enough to show emotions. It would make a perfect comics! xD I could easily picture scenes into frames and pages.
The summary line in itself is pretty catchy! ^___^
I had my fun when reading ^___^ Jun-chan is so sweet here XD

[kajalmonsta]

thanks a lot for reading and commenting and thinking about it that way^^
i'm no native speaker so that's probably the reason why the dialouges and thoughts are that simple^^;;; but i'm glad you liked it^^

[orenji_kiseki]

well, that about simpliness was actually kind of compliment xD;; I guess I didn't make it sound like that, though it was my intention xD the dialouges are believable and strong thanks to their simpliness XD (and they would fit with no problems in comics frames! XD)
I'm not a native speaker either, btw XD

[kajalmonsta]

oh okay, now i get it^^ thanks a lot for liking them and it really means a lot to me that you think they're believable and strong.^__^
if i could draw i could turn it into a comic, but my pictures are always baaaaaaadXD
oh, i wouldn't have thoght that^^

[asakurariku]

I bet OH-CHAN would really do that. We just don't know when that happens. Of course it's Juntoshi's LITTLE himitsu! hehe

this fic is cute! :D

btw I'm Riku. hope we may become friends! :D ja ne!

[kajalmonsta]

yeah, i can totally imagine that too...it was inspired by an interview i read, where jun said he is drinking whiskey at home all alone after work^^

thanks a lot for liking it^^

hey, riku^^ i would love to become friends with you^^

[asakurariku]

haha I read that issue too. :D and yeah I can just clearly imagine OH-chan noticing him with that kind of lonely state.

hehe I'll you up! Pls. accept me te.

Thanks! :D (If u would like to, check out my fic as well.)

[kajalmonsta]

yeah, me too^^ oh-chan might space out a lot, but he still notices his surroundings very well (at least that's my imagination)

i will check out your fics^^

[arashi_sugoi]

Awww that was so sweet <3 ;_; JUNTOSHI YAY! lol thanks for sharing a great fic :) But i dont get who Jack Daniels is? Did u just make that up?

[kajalmonsta]

thank you very much <3 i'm really glad you liked it^^

jack daniels is a whiskey brand^^

[yeo_ubi]

This is my...fourth time reading this? I think about that much. I can't help it, this fic is so inspirational. In just a few words you managed to catch so much emotion. I love it. ^ ^

Thank you!

[kajalmonsta]

your fourth time? oh my god, i feel really honored to hear that^^ thank you very very much for liking it that much and thinking that i did a good job with the emotions <3<3 maaah i feel like hugging you... gomen *hugs* >///