Fandom: Maou

[i_am_zan]

Title : Under the Cut. This IS A SPOILER WARNING
Rating :G
Pairings:None
Genre :Naruse thinking thoughts

Warnings: Just to make it QUITE QUITE CLEAR. THIS IS A SPOILER WARNING. DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU”VE SEEN IT ALL. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.

Disclaimer: Naruse Ryou, Naoto Serizawa and all characters belong to the TBS drama Maou and their

Comments

[orenji_kiseki]

The end is not fair. Too many unfortunate accidents and everything... everything was just too late.
Your fic, though it's too poetic for me, was very nice, and the last words struck the heart completely. Really good T___T

[i_am_zan]

Aahh thank you. I am sure, it is poetic just enough for you, just right. That you could see it so.

Thank you for reading and the kind words.

[orenji_kiseki]

Ah, I meant by poetic that I don't really like poetic form, but you're right, it was the amount I can like and understand, nicely written too.

Thank you for writing this too!

[nishiara_hitomi]

Too little, too late indeed. Finally both of them grasp realization.

Wonderful as always my darling ^^.

[i_am_zan]

Thank you again for your kind words ... at this rate my head is going to explode from the sheer bigheaded-ness you know ...and it won't be pretty!!!

^__^ *hugs*

ps - did you see I put in differential!!! har we can be Math dorks together!!!

[nishiara_hitomi]

You're a marvelous writter you need more LOVE.

YAY MATH DORK PAWER!!!!!!

[flange5]

&hearts

[i_am_zan]

I was a complete mess. I think I must have started to tear up already about the time where Naoto's boss speaks to Naruse and he does that swallowing thing.

By the time we got to the Hamlet/Laertes duel crossovers with Romeo/Juliet death scene, I was a quivering and total mess. Thank goodness it was four in the morning and I didn't alarm the children or anything.

That last shot was sheer wonderfulness. They looked so happy and at peace and the close up with the harmonica in Naoto's hand ...

The butterflies was a lovely thing too, not overdone, because it drove home even more the poignancy of the story.

[flange5]

The butterflies . . . should have been cheesy, and just weren't --probably because we were so desperate for peace, and then an imagery that suggests release and . . . communion between them, or harmony--that they're free but decide to fly together . . . damn it, wibbling again

Must get ready before in-laws return . . .

*hugs and love*

[resolute_reader]

I just watched it last night (episode eleven that is) I still can't get over it either. Just thinking about it brings me to the verge of tears (and sometimes I just start crying)

Did writing this help? Because I'm crying again reading it. I really think it deserves a place among the great tragedies of history, it was completely different because neither of them really "won" in the end. Any other ending might have disappointed me but I'm still grieving over it.

*Sigh* It was a pretty little fic (even if I should have waited a few more days before reading it)

[i_am_zan]

See my above reply ...yes I was a complete mess.

Also tragedy yes... again see reply above. The end was fitting and at least they found peace and at least it was closure for both of them.

Writing this helped a little ... I was melancholic a lot yesterday.

Thank you, and I'm sorry for making you cry again ... although that in itself is the best comment I could ever get.

[resolute_reader]

It's really the same here, I'm having a lot of trouble pretending nothing is wrong when I'm around other people . . . this may take a while *sigh*

I've been unable to write fluff after watching it so maybe I'll write some angst and see if it helps.

Don't worry about it, I'm sure all the tears will be worth it once I get over this feeling of desolation and despondency ^^

[lybra87]

I'm crying now, and I'm so glad I got to see this right after; it's quite a bit of comfort, somehow.

This is just beautiful, I savoured this, there are no other words for it. It fits so perfectly, somehow. It carries the weight of tears, and yet it helps a little too, with mine.

It's lovely.

[i_am_zan]

Thank you for reading. Writing it helped too.

Thank you for the lovely comment.