Arashi - Maybe (ShOhno - Sho x Ohno)

[boe_4eva]

I hope i remember how to do this right... hmm
Title: Maybe
Pairing: ShOhno (Sho x Ohno)
Rating: R verging maybe on NC17... not sure
Characters: Sakurai Sho and Ohno Satoshi
Author: ME (BOE_4eva) =^^=
Warning: Slight OOC when drunk...
Summary: Sho tries to prove his point, but does he take it a little too far?
Note: My first one shot lemony ficceh! I

Comments

[salwaphoenix]

this is so good! i never imagine sho+oh-chan's pairing can be rated nc17.. i guess u did it!

write something on juntoshi too please ^____^

[boe_4eva]

I totally plan on that next!!!
Thanx for teh comment!!!

[lockability]

*is surprised!!*

It's a hard pairing to write, yea? And haha, if you write me a fic everytime I write you one, well, I wouldn't be against making a pattern of it! :P

*glomp*

[boe_4eva]

I will try my hardest to keep up with you!!! ^^
I hope you liked it bella!!!
*glomp* *squeezes tightly*
:O Why ish chu not on msn bella?!? chu should totaly come on!! *nod nod*

[tacchon]

Interesting pairing. :3

Just a quick note:

that one person would remain relatively soba

At that phrase, I think you mean "sober" instead of "soba". Right? Sorry if I'm being nitpicky but urm... yeah. Force of habit. ^^;;;

[boe_4eva]

hehe... yesh yesh
that ish what i meant
Its reasons like that, that prove... i need a beta reader... T.T
Well aside from that... i hope you liked it...

[tacchon]

Well, if you don't mind, I can help beta for purely grammatical and spelling purposes. :]

I liked it. :D

[boe_4eva]

:O
Would you?!
I have a friend who can beta for me. But shes not familiar with the fandom. And it may be a tad difficult for her.
Mind if i contact you when i finish my next one-shot?

[xanderave]

YAMA-PAIR IS LOVE!

And like what shikon_hime said, the few mistakes did make me giggle other than the soba, there's also "under the confines of his pants and boxes" - I'm sure you meant boxers :)

Overall, nice read. More ShoxOhno love is needed.

[boe_4eva]

hehe.... hehe.... woops *fixes mistake*
Im no good at beta-ing myself -_-''

[shirofukurou]

I dunno why, I seldom read Arashi fanfics, but I was drawn to this one and OMG I loved the ending XDD

[boe_4eva]

:O:O YAY Im happy you read it!! And that u liked it =^^=
Thankyou for commenting!!