I'm done

[jennap]

I've finished The Color Girl. Anyone who wants to take a look is welcome, but I'm also looking for editors and critics. Editors look for grammar. Critics look for logic flaws. I think it ends horridly, but I'd like to hear someone else's opinion, please. I'm sending it by email, but I'll also prirnt out a master copy for writen edits and comments, cuz it's cool to see alot of colorful inks and viewpoints.

thanks you and good night.