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[jennaiel]

Screaming songs from the Sirens fall on deaf ears.
Dark jewels no longer hold me captive.
Voice no longer echoes but is pulled into the chasm, lost forever.
Golden threads fraying at the ends.
Blood is thicker than water but flows just as freely.
Love has nothing to do with itself. shneee

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[r3p3ntiv3]

Screaming songs from the Sirens fall on deaf ears.

- hmmm.. could this be Katrina related? Probably not.

Dark jewels no longer hold me captive.

- Myspace?

Voice no longer echoes but is pulled into the chasm, lost forever.

- hmm.. not sure what to make of that line.

Golden threads fraying at the ends.

- life?

Blood is thicker than water but flows just as freely.

- Bad can run just as fast/slow as good.

Love has nothing to do with itself. shneee

- Shneee? lol

I liked it. I have trouble ever comming up with poetry. If anything I come up with stuff that rhymes. I don't feel those are proper.

To r3p3ntiv3: There is nothing wrong with rhyming poetry damnit!

[thegreattambino]

For someone to whom the Sirens are not audible, you certainly have a delightfully Amos-like crypticness!

I love you.