Title: Whiter Shade of Pale
Universe: Supernatural
Pairing: None
Warning: It's a ghost story.
Rating: harsh language
With thanks to
koyote19 for both beta and the title, to
beadslut for beta and kick in the pants (and, I notice, the icon), and to S., V., and D., who told me it wasn't finished yet but they wanted to read it when it was.
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A buddy, who doesn't watch the show, wanted even more exposition, an explanation of what the rock salt and gasoline referred to, but as much as I love him and value his opinion, and I do, I'm not going to do that, since this is fanfiction and my dominant, call it my preferred, audience knows the mythos and so I'm not so much short-cutting for laziness as not over-explaining a shared assumption. When I'm writing in my original 'verse, I'll be careful to set up the world-building, but here and now, no, I'm going to just say "Sam and Dean" and not explain that they are brothers and ghosthunters and so on and so forth.
Thanks for re-reading and affirming that the changes helped.
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I love this line, this image, the most of all of them, even the creepifying one.
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So I'm glad to hear it works. 8-)
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