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Fic: That New Kirk Smell (Zach/Chris)

Jun 18, 2009 15:18

Title: That New Kirk Smell
Author: jenlynn820
Pairing: Chris Pine/Zachary Quinto (Star Trek 2009 RPS)
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: I don’t know Zach or Chris and I make no profit from this work.
Summary: The scent of a captain. (Sex in a bathtub.)
Beta: none, all mistakes my own.
Word Count: 1069

( The air was humid and the water was very warm, steam rising from the surface. The body pressed against Zach was warmer still. )

Comments 70

brin_bailey June 18 2009, 19:41:22 UTC

Hot porn with awesome banter? I think you own my soul a little bit. &hearts

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 20:05:49 UTC

Aww, thanks! :D Zach and Chris own my soul a lot :P

imagination55 June 18 2009, 19:50:06 UTC

I've just spent nearly an hour re-watching Chris/Zach interviews and then refreshed my friend's page and this popped up and lol, I think I've found the secret to vivid enjoyment. I could so hear them in my head and my imagination just totally went all wild whilst reading.

Chris grinned and they kissed again, sloppily this time, like two over eager teenagers

Supreme guh.

Something lovely and languid on a otherwise boring, slow Thursday evening. Well done, you. ♥

PS. Is it slightly wrong to swoon over mentions of Chris' scar? Its probably clichéd to say it adds 'character', but its just so...him. I think that's one of the many reasons I become fascinated by looking at him lol.

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 20:07:58 UTC

I did that last night, it definitely adds to it when you've got their voices rattling around in your head.

I'm so glad you liked it! :D

PS. Is it slightly wrong to swoon over mentions of Chris' scar? Its probably clichéd to say it adds 'character', but its just so...him. I think that's one of the many reasons I become fascinated by looking at him lol

Not at all, I'm with you on that. It's why I keep mentioning it in fics lol. There's something incredibly sexy about it, even about his acne scars if you ask me. Maybe its a cliché but it does add character. He'd sort of look like a Ken doll otherwise.

imagination55 June 18 2009, 20:17:45 UTC

He'd sort of look like a Ken doll otherwise.

Yes! I saw some ST promo pictures where serious airbrushing had gone on and its just like NOOOOOOOOOO! Don't touch the imperfect perfect! Its like putting lots of make up over the scar underneath Jesse Spencer's eye. Just, no. Scar = those mannerisms/personality quirks that are put into a fic that makes it easy to recognise a person, especially in RPF. :)

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 21:29:03 UTC

Someone went a little photoshop happy with those promo shots.

Scar = those mannerisms/personality quirks that are put into a fic that makes it easy to recognise a person, especially in RPF. :)

Exactly! Otherwise they're no better than blow up dolls.

sunhawk June 18 2009, 19:53:02 UTC

Lovely and cute banter too, oh delight! ^________^

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 20:08:10 UTC

thanks so much, hon :)

laurabryannan June 18 2009, 20:03:56 UTC

I love the smell of Kirk in the morning.

Quite nummy! Great dialog too. ^_^

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 20:08:47 UTC

I love the smell of Kirk in the morning.

If I wrote a sequel that would have to be the title ;)

Thank you so much! :D

complyordie June 18 2009, 20:28:08 UTC

I THINK I JUST MELTED. Aslkdjfghsldkfjgsl this was hot but at the same time tender and ...gah. I'm trying to write a coherent comment right now but it's just not working, haha! <3

jenlynn820 June 18 2009, 21:29:26 UTC

thank you! :D I'm really glad you liked it :)