Pride - Part Twenty Three

[jenexell]

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[bowiscute145]

i'm gonna get some home made soup and then shall return to read this.
IT IS MY PLAN OF ACTION!
the soup is hidden from sight so i have pasta salad instead.
*reads*
THIS IS SET IN 1998?! that so swam past me.
and orlando, he misses orli!
*laughs at sean/viggo teritorialness (not that that's a word)*
i have no idea why but the phrase 'bat shit' amuses me much too much.
oh i get obsessed with being obsessed, and then i start feeling guilty when i'm not obsessing and it's all weird and complicated.
i'm getting confused too much thinking. i try to avoid thinking in general. :]
i'm loving beatrice, whoever she is.
“Still. Your pride is way cooler.” Henry grumped. “Mine’s full of girls.” - SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS LINE!
and so much love for this fic.
it's wonderful.
xxxx

[jenexell]

Wow! Awesome feedback once more! *squishes*

Thank you so much! (although you are possibly the maddest feedbacker I've ever come across! *grin*)

So here we go...

In your defense the year the fic was set is only mention twice. Once in the prologue and once in chapter one.
Yes of course he misses Orli! Who wouldn't?
It is a funny image isn't it... but so true if you've ever watched two tom cats...
Obsession is bad... beleive me... I never get any work done.
If thinking confuses you, don't do it. Its a rule I live by.
Beatrice is a bit special... more of her later!
I love that line too! Its so what a 10 year old would say!!!

Thanks again for the feedback, and I'm so glad your still enjoying it! *huggles*

[bowiscute145]

somehow i can believe you.
oh well in the prologue and chapter one i probably wasn't going crazy cause i was still a bit like 'wtf? cats?!?!?!?!'
and urgh. i heart you so much. because of the 'wtf? cats?!?!?!?!?!' because well, exactly. *awkward moment*
*HUGS!*

[weepingnaiad]

Oh, this was a wonderful chapter! I enjoyed learning a bit more about the pride culture. The Sean & Viggo territory scene was hilarious!

Glad Vig's finally realized what was going on with him and why he freaked. I hope he will be able to confide at least bits of that to Orlando so they can move into a better balanced relationship.

Eagerly awaiting the next update!
*hugs*
WN

[jenexell]

If you've ever watched two tom cats, you'll know everything I said about Viggo and Sean is true! LOL Bless them.

Viggo needed some time to sort his head out, and he's not completely there yet, but hey, he's close. and your right, anything they started before would have been really unhealthy.

Glad you're enjoying this so much! Next chapter is up! *smooch*

[alran]

Oh Viggo's going back, so everything is going to be all right with the world.
Or is it?
Must be wonderful to have parents who can transform into living cuddly toys.

[jenexell]

is anything ever completely alright in this world??? LOL. And i know what you mean about having parents that turn into soft toys! I want them too! *sigh*

Thanks for the comment hun! *huggles and smooches*

[jackieville]

I am so happy Viggo is going back, it's going to be interesting to see how Orlando reacts!!! *bounces*

*hugs*

[jenexell]

hmmm... yeah, the reunion is going to be... interesting! LOL.

Thanks for the comment sweetness! *huggles*

[roomfor2]

good to have viggo back and the image of henry cuddling up to him is totally cute! *awwww*

[jenexell]

It was good to write him again to be honest, and Henry is at that still cute age. Squeeeee... More of him later on! Promise.

Thanks for the comment hun! *huggles*