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What Else Would You Have Me Be? Chapter 4

Mar 03, 2011 00:41

Title: What Else Would You Have Me Be?
Fandom & Pairing: Leverage; Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Rating: PG for now, will go up
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Some jobs changed the team for the better. Some, for the worse, and San Lorenzo hadn't been the first kind. But maybe it hadn't been the second, ( Read more... )

leverage, alec hardison/eliot spencer

Comments 10

mulder200 March 3 2011, 06:54:36 UTC

"Arizona has the death penalty, don't it?"

Oh Fuck indeed! How will they get Eliot out of this?

jendavis March 3 2011, 07:22:59 UTC

No spoilers, but I promise it's going to be an epically bad idea. ;)

belladhanna March 3 2011, 11:38:35 UTC

Well hells bells!!! Every time you post a chapter I get more and more into it. I'm practically leaning into the computer screen.

I can't imagine how they're going to get Eliot out of this.

*but how terrible would I be to say, I'd LOVE to have been in on the strip search???

jendavis March 3 2011, 17:09:04 UTC

"*but how terrible would I be to say, I'd LOVE to have been in on the strip search???"

Not terrible at all, I'm right there with you. ;)

scout_lover March 3 2011, 15:32:56 UTC

Ha! See? I was right, it's definitely going to get worse!

But *whimpers* poor Eliot, in jail in the one state that actually makes Texas look sane … This is soooooo not good!

(Oh, and in the third section, first paragraph, you have a "through him inside the jail" when I think you mean "throw him inside.")

jendavis March 3 2011, 17:19:54 UTC

Doh! Thanks for the heads up on the typo! *hugs*

The Maricopa county jail was on one of those crime documentary shows, and yeah. Looks like a pretty horrific place- it would be horrific for a *prison.* Arizona seems a little bit insane when it comes to their prisons. (

honeyjojames March 4 2011, 01:34:39 UTC

You and your cliffhangers! Every chapter leaves me on the edge of my seat! ♥

jendavis March 4 2011, 03:44:12 UTC

Hee! Yeah, I tend to be a little bit evil that way. Sorry?

*is actually not very sorry, because EVIL*

;)

jesco0307 March 7 2011, 19:18:25 UTC

This is so good. I have to admit, the second the jail was mentioned, I thought someone would end up in there.

I can't wait for more, this is so good.

jendavis March 8 2011, 08:23:42 UTC

Oh yeah. This is totally coming out of the fact that I just re-watched the first season of Prison Break, no lie.

Thanks for reading! Glad you like!