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jendavis

Famous Last Words

Sep 15, 2010 14:25

Title: Famous Last Words
Fandom/ Pairing The Losers (comic 'verse, with some help from the movie), eventual Jensen/Cougar
Rating: R overall
Summary: Cougar was bleeding all over the bomb in his lap, the last time Jensen saw him. But that was then.

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the losers, jensen/cougar

Comments 9

emocezi September 15 2010, 19:49:26 UTC

Jesus H. Christ.

You slaughtered me with that last line.

Man, Cougar has no idea how lucky Jensen is that ke managed to stay sane. And if Cougs thinks he's pissed about Aisha. Just wait until Jensen gets ahold of her.

Christ. CHRIST.

Awesome chapter. I feel like I was just punched in the gut though. ;_;

jendavis September 15 2010, 21:43:03 UTC

Glad you liked, sorry about your stomach!

Oh, they don't have reasons to be pissed off. Yet. They will. ;)

otherpervert September 15 2010, 19:58:39 UTC

Holy crap, can I marry this fic? Alright, three favorite lines:

Only Jensen could make a stoning sound like a date, and since Cougar was used to dooming himself, he said yes.

Bwa!! I so snorted my coke when I read that. Jensen's got skills that way.

"Let he who has a handful of rocks cast the first stone," was all the warning Jensen gave when they arrived, but Cougar had vanished by the time he'd finished his wind-up.

lol! Same for this line. The "research montage" had me cackling gleefully.

"Aisha's here."

Son. of. a. bitch. This is gonna get messy.

jendavis September 15 2010, 21:44:32 UTC

You can marry the story, but I warn you, it's a total alcoholic, and has missed it's last three child support payments. :)

And yes. Messy. IT SHALL BE SO.

:D

marvinetta September 15 2010, 20:13:31 UTC

Ooo. This series is really interesting!! I can't wait to see where it's going.

jendavis September 15 2010, 21:48:01 UTC

Hee! Me neither! Glad you're liking!

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jendavis September 15 2010, 21:51:34 UTC

hee! I'm already working on it, sometime in the next few days.

And evil cliffhanger day should totally be a bank holiday. That would be great.

elenorasweet September 16 2010, 07:00:37 UTC

Gnnnnnn!!! I can't believe it, omg! This fic rocks so damn hard. SO DAMN HARD. I can't wait to see how you work Aisha into this!!

jendavis September 17 2010, 05:40:34 UTC

Hee! I figure anyone as badass as her would brush off a nuke like it was nothing. But yeah, she should be an interesting one to play around with, and she's definitely going to complicate things. (Mostly on my end, because I didn't know she was going to show up at all until I'd already written that scene).